Fic: Road to Damascus (3/?)

[hankmoodyblues]

Third in an ongoing series of vignettes detailing Hank and Karen's lives during her pregnancy.

Title: My Kingdom For a Horse
Fandom: Californication
Rating: PG-13 for language
Pairing: Hank/Karen
Spoilers: Working off the montage of clips at the end of 2x10 'In Utero' but they're only brief flashes. I'm making up the story behind them.
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Comments

[hummingfly67]

I really do think you have Hank's voice down.

Little snippets I enjoyed (not that I didn't enjoy the whole damn thing):

a rarity he ascribes to this unusual lightness of being that just might be happiness.

Hank used to scoff when he heard women described as angels in sunlight, he sees that now as well.

Kudos!

[hankmoodyblues]

Thanks! It helped distract me from the office idiots for a while, at any rate.

[forbiddenxspark]

He labels himself ‘a fucking sap’ as soon as he thinks it but he can’t take it back; he isn’t even sure that he wants to.
IMO, I think that is the best way you have described Hank in this series.

This third installment is by far the best, and I really kind of found myself in love with the first! (Not that the second was bad at all, it wasn't!) There were many lines here that made me think THIS is really what's going through Hank's head while watching this part on the montage!

Again, very well written! You absolute fucking sap. XD

[hankmoodyblues]

Thanks! I love Hank and in a lot of ways I think it's easier to write for this show than any other. That and I'm having withdrawal symptoms waiting for season four.

[cali_kenna]

Well done! Bravo! :)

And you are definitely not the only one dying for season four to come out! I'm dying to find out what happens next!

[hankmoodyblues]

Thanks!

This is why I both love and loathe cliffhangers.