The heart breaks at the sound of a silenced songbird

Jul 03, 2003 21:56

There once was a beautiful songbird. He lived in the woods, free to fly around wherever he wished and every day he would sing his songs. All the other animals loved to listen to him sing and would gather around him wherever he was, trying to get his attention, wanting him to sing for them. The bird enjoyed entertaining his friends and the ( Read more... )

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Hi Hannah! anonymous July 19 2003, 12:02:33 UTC
I like your story . Very real ! I wrote one look like on yours , but you wrote about moral . And about people , which thinking about themself , don`t think about paine , which they do to other . And if they think , that they doing well .
Good work !
Kylie .

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Re: Hi Hannah! hannahwood July 19 2003, 14:23:15 UTC
Thank you. It was something I needed to write down.

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Hi anonymous July 20 2003, 02:46:31 UTC
Welcome ! you`re good writer , so keep doing your work !It`s very sweet poem , about songbird . Do you study on writer ?

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Re: Hi hannahwood July 20 2003, 11:05:08 UTC
I write poetry in my spare time and I'm going to be taking creative writing and english courses in the near future

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Hi anonymous July 22 2003, 14:05:10 UTC
Good , i wanna do that too . I write a short stories , little poems , and scripts ... well , I just trying to make that . Keep going your way ! I began to write in my childhoor , ad now I write too . I like it ... When do you began to write ? And whom do you will wanna be , I mean profession ?
Kylie ...

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Hey anonymous July 22 2003, 14:32:06 UTC
hannah , what do you think about that ? I finded that ... insane , huh ? http://www.livejournal.com/userinfo.bml?user=slashpuppets
They use you !

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I don`t think !!!! anonymous July 22 2003, 14:34:04 UTC
I don`t think , that if you are sister of the star , that anyone can use you ! You have your life ! It`s really crazy , i think that it`s wrong ... not fun ! What do you think about that ?

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