barnburner, part 6/6

[hanschenfangirl]

barnburner 
(  part one,  part two,  part three,  part four,  part fiveNiall/Zayn, secondary Harry/Louis

Comments

[shrdmdnssftw]

Wow, this was just. This was brilliant really, and I have no idea why I haven't read it before, but having it all in one go-

I really enjoyed the way you constructed this 'verse, how each of the boys had a very clear role in the others' lives. I love the idea of Liam being in that position of authority, but also supporting Zayn, and the way that the matches panned out. I'm not personally a huge fan of sport, but this AU just drew me in so well, I was on the edge of my seat, waiting to see who would win in the end.

Your writing style is just fantastic, and I love the way your title fit the fic so well. The relationships you crafted, both Harry and Louis' simple love and the complications between Niall and Zayn, were so perfect. There's so much I adore about this story and I just want you to know that this is a definite new favourite of mine.

Brilliant writing, you tell such an engaging tale.

[colazitron]

Oh, that was a lovely conclusion. <3