gracie | chapter three

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He laughs and I instantly know that he's clueless about the situation and what’s really going on. “I’ve tried to warn you about drinking so much before, baby, it never ends well..” I don’t say anything as he gathers me in his arms and walks me to Amanda’s car

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[lipsticklullaby]

This chapter was so entertaining--I like Jen drunk lol!

Anyway, I feel as though you're really falling in to the story now and you've got a good pace and style going. Be careful not to flip between past and present tense, though--pick one and stick with it.

Overall, really good progress. I am really excited to see where this goes!