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kisoap in hansumdo

hurtbeat

Jul 09, 2016 23:56

hurtbeat
979w; pg (young k/nayeon)
(noun) in the limbo between being in love and falling out of it, and being hurt by this back and forth.
a/n: seven months later and i still just want to read/write a lot of brian/nayeon for no reason. this was supposed to end differently but well. oh well. i hope the formatting works.

( leaning closer to her on one of those late night drives, parked in front of the han river, some of his hair that nayeon keeps suggesting he should get trimmed falling into his face, when he asks, can i kiss you? )

pairing: young k/nayeon, fandom: day6, rating: pg, fandom: twice, #kisoap, #oneshot

Comments 5

kirakirashahida July 11 2016, 07:17:14 UTC

this is so pretty :((((( and sad :(((
i think a big part of you is really destined to hurt me through angst

kisoap July 13 2016, 07:24:57 UTC

the original ending was actually them working things out, but it didn't fit right so i just left it like this ):
i also hurt myself through angst. and then you write angst and hurt me even more. it's a cycle sdlgkhksjdf
thank you shida ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

luminors July 14 2016, 20:06:48 UTC

oh man, i'm really starting to become so fond of your writing style; it's just beautiful ;;; i'm pretty new to this ship but this fic makes me consider shipping them

can i just say that my fave part about this, aside from how great your writing style is, is how the spaces between the paragraphs just becomes progressively bigger as they grow more and more distant? i loved that, it was so indicative of the distance that just started to grow between these two people.

such a lovely (albeit sad) fic <3

kisoap July 29 2016, 07:05:47 UTC

wahhh thank you! i feel so flattered that i'm blushing ;;
and i'm so happy to hear that! come and ship it with me because i'm pretty much on my own haha!
and you noticed! when i was writing this fic, i had that idea in my head to represent their distance with the formatting/spacing and i'm glad it worked :D

thank you so much for reading ♥♥♥♥♥

xkayye November 4 2016, 16:34:58 UTC

just found this and i am so in love with it. the way you write is so visual. like, words just don't suffice but even the way you structured the whole thing brings more depth into it. i hope i make sense. but anyways, i love the details of their relationship from the beginning to the end.