The Wife part 4 (WIP)

[hao_lin]

That evening the phone rang. Hannibal answered, then quickly passed the phone to Autumn. She took the phone, listened and nodded repeatedly. Cradled it against her shoulder and scratched notes on a pad. Her expression became grimmer as she listened. Mouth drawn down at the corners, lips pressed white

Comments

[stage_master]

I really loved this story. The strength and subtlety of Hannibal and Face's relationship was wonderfully moving, and I loved the growing bond between John's children and old life and that of his life with the team. A great read- thank you!

The Wife Part 4 WIP

[reawakening2010]

This was a well written story because I felt uncomfortable most of the way through it. I should have. The ex-wife, kids, and current lover who is now in a homosexual relationship with the ex-husband under the same roof should feel uncomfortable. Yet, it did not feel melodramatic. It felt like a group of people trying to get through a difficult moment in the most mature way they could. Thank you for dealing with an aspect of Hannibal's life that doesn't get a lot of treatment. I appreciate your talent.

Re: The Wife Part 4 WIP

[hao_lin]

Thank-you for your kind comment. Its a real treat when somebody digs up my old fics to read. I'm glad the tone was right. I figured that even if the marriage didn't work out, Hannibal would have picked somebody pretty remarkable if ever had married.