Unfinished

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Lance stepped slowly off the train, looked to the sky, breathed in, and let out a heavy sigh of relief. He was home. Well, he was back. He wasn't quite sure how much of a home this place would still be, but he was definitely interested to find out.

Comments

[dvrsionsstud]

That was...ummm yeah...there really aren't words for that. Honestly, that's probably one of your best stories thus far lol i want you to continue it, and you better!

[pahlavi]

Whoa, that was intense. =O

[utensilaction]

that was, without a doubt, the best thing i have read of yours to date. i need more michael! i am almost crying here! more!!!
~mle

[utensilaction]

i am so very glad i got to spend some quality michael brooks time this weekend! i had a great dinner... we definitely need to hang out more next time i am in town (which is this weekend by the way, i have friday off of work!). keep me updated on the "boys suck" thing... (i happen to whole-heartedly agree with that statement).
~mle