Baggage

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As Ryan Davis walked down the sidewalk through the crowds of people, the cold, winter wind tossled his hair while his feet stirred the puddles between the cracks in the pavement. He had both his hands thrust deep into his denim pockets and a scarf tied tightly around his neck to keep him warm. He looked straight ahead, confidently shy, and he

Comments

[dvrsionsstud]

I'm not quite sure what to say to that quite yet...but for now I'll leave you with this...it got me really horny...

[redoctober87]

That was good. I liked it. I am going to start leaving more comments.

Now for the analysis.

First Entry

[thelastpiece]

This is the first thing I read from you and I'm not disappointed ;) You rock out with your... wait.. I'll leave it at that......