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loved November 12 2010, 14:59:16 UTC
But really I wanted to vote for do an ADIML while exploring nearby towns. :) Good luck with your career in dancing. And that professor sounds intense in both a good and potentially scary/intimidating way.

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happinesstrail November 13 2010, 01:26:02 UTC
Oooh ADIML and nearby towns sounds good! Especially since they're so close.

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loved December 9 2010, 19:11:12 UTC
Since I don't think you ever ended up doing this, I vote for this once you're on winter break or something. :)

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sseafaring November 13 2010, 02:51:55 UTC
I agree re: ADIML + nearby towns!

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ickletarakins November 12 2010, 15:14:25 UTC
whatever, that looks/sounds like a poem to me, and I like it!

I chose "explore nearby towns" because whenever Steve and I end up doing something like that we discover great new things and have a blast :)

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happinesstrail November 13 2010, 14:48:02 UTC
We have some cute towns around, so I may combine the two options that won ;)

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stinger78 November 12 2010, 16:25:46 UTC
I like your poem. :) I'm not often a fan of bolded intertext, but you've made it work (by having a solid reason to do it each time).

I went with "photo-document a day in your life," but I'd also be perfectly happy with "make a piece of art & hang it proudly" (and/or whatever you feel like doing at the time). I will say I think the "I Love You" book would work best for a V-Day thing.

"I can't wait to embark on my dancing career, which I started this morning dancing around the apartment with nothing but Pikachu slippers on. We'll see how this new path goes for me."
--Just fyi, I'm fairly certain it'd go pretty well if that were your standard attire. That said, I recommend not going that route: it'll be more difficult but ultimately more rewarding--and less icky.

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happinesstrail November 13 2010, 14:47:43 UTC
Thanks! I find that bolded intertext is usually cheesy, which is kinda how I started out writing this poem (I was trying to think of a synonym for identity for a paper, so I was breaking down identity and it just kept going)

hahahaha, I would love to be the Vegas dancer who always wears random character slippers. I bet my audience would be an interesting mix between furries, gamers, anime lovers, and pedophiles.

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stinger78 November 16 2010, 04:32:23 UTC
"I bet my audience would be an interesting mix between furries, gamers, anime lovers, and pedophiles."
--Are there other types of audiences? ;)

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happinesstrail November 18 2010, 13:57:13 UTC
GOOD POINT!

Oh, wait wait. Psychopaths! Now it's a complete audience list.

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happinesstrail November 13 2010, 14:45:53 UTC
Yes, I think the book posted above is best read under the stress of writing a paper on it. :)

I'd rather you like my poetry than like *real* poetry. Professional poets don't have shit on me if I have your support because you have me wrapped around your little finger!

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sseafaring November 13 2010, 02:52:59 UTC
Every time I see dancers perform (which, okay, is only on TV) I wish my body had that kind of amazing coordination!

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happinesstrail November 13 2010, 14:44:51 UTC
Me too. And the butts.. I wish my butt would be so nice. haha

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sseafaring November 13 2010, 16:43:34 UTC
That too!

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