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[happy_moon_fox]

The Book: It is important to note that suddenly, and against all probability, a Sperm Whale had been called into existence, several miles above the surface of an alien planet and since this is not a naturally tenable position for a whale, this innocent creature had very little time to come to terms with its identity. This is what it thought, as it

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[damasquerade]

"Many people have speculated that if we knew exactly *why* the bowl of petunias had thought that we would know a lot more about the nature of the universe than we do now."

Let me preface this by telling you that I edit grammar, punctuation etc for a living. :) I absolutely love the thought process of the whale, and am thoroughly confused but delighted by the creativity of this entry. But I would put a comma after "had thought that". The sentence confused me at first :D

[damasquerade]

Ah god, but I assumed this was part of a creative writing project. And then I have the thought that perhaps it wasn't, and then Google makes me realise that I'm delivering a critique to a person that isn't Douglas Adams. I'm sorry XD

[happy_moon_fox]

lol is ok XD