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The Case of the Maze Gardener ch6

Jul 29, 2010 14:13

Title:The Case of the Maze Gardener ch6
Rating: G
Word Count: 604
Summary: While on a case in west England, Holmes and Watson find that almost nothing is as it seems.
Warnings: umm....none...

Sooooo...I haven't written Watson in a while, and I'd like to know if I've still got it. PLEASE REVIEW

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ch, holmes, the case of the maze gardener, sherlock, 6, watson

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jaelijn July 29 2010, 21:23:48 UTC

I have not seen any great differences in your Watson voice in comparison to the previous chapters... There is very little here to really tell... But I like how you have Watson being right here! :D And Holmes reaction is just priceless!

caught one spelling mistake on the way, which distorts your meaning somewhat ;): I’m curtain they will as well should be certain ;)