Comments | happyviruses: what do you want to do?

happyviruses

what do you want to do?

Mar 18, 2013 17:41

Title: What Do You Want to Do?
Pairing: JinChan
Word Count: 2457
Summary: Jinyoung spends his day off relaxing, but then Gongchan comes in and ruins everything (or does he?).
Rating: R ( Read more... )

length: one-shot, pairing: jinyoung/gongchan, rating: r, !fic, kpop: b1a4

Comments 4

ironthrone March 19 2013, 04:37:28 UTC

(this is sarah btw!!!)

for your first completed fic this is good :D commenting on fic is always so awkward for me, i never know what to say bc i'm rly bad with words, sorry ;; but rly, i liked it!

wow, even his cock is cute.
made me laugh out loud tbh

also, i actually prefer reading everything in lower case.

happyviruses March 19 2013, 04:57:45 UTC

omg, thank you!

lol this is the best first comment i could ever ask for, since it's coming from you~

i'm glad you liked it, it means a lot to me.

sai12 March 19 2013, 04:57:54 UTC

Wow I loved you described everything! If I were on my computer I'd probably quote half this back to you.

Tho there is one thing I'm upset about and that is being cockblocked. So this means you should write a sequel.

happyviruses March 19 2013, 06:27:12 UTC

aw, thank you, i'm glad you liked it~

and lmfao, i'm sorry about the cockblock.
i've never written smut before, so i tried to take it a little slowly.
i've had quite a few people ask me to write a sequel...
so i probably will when i feel a bit more comfy writing it.

thanks for the comment~