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harajunko86

I Want To Live! (Side story) Part (2/2)

Mar 04, 2011 20:31

Title: I Want To Live! (Side story) Part (2/2)

Pairing: (Main) KyuMin, (Side) KangTeuk, HanChul, SiMin (one-sided only)

Genre: Angst, attempted humour (might fail miserably) and romance

Rating: PG-13

Disclaimer: Seriously, do I have to do this everytime?! *annoyed* The boys don’t belong to me. PERIOD.

Notes: Words in ‘italics’ are thoughts/flashbacks.

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fanfic, kyumin, kangteuk, hanchul, i want to live, multi-chaptered

Comments 19

naomibe March 4 2011, 15:12:55 UTC

Describe the story through Siwon’s eyes, and his past, is a good idea. It’s easiest to understand his love (or obsession) for Sungmin (OK, it’s very easy to love Sungmin…). It’s a one-side love, but I like their weird bond a lot ( ... )

harajunko86 March 5 2011, 04:32:45 UTC

woah!! i just love your long post! <3
Since Siwon is only telling his side of the story, he doesn't know much about Sungmin's first kill. Sungmin will be narrating that part himself later on. Something drastic and traumatising must've happened to change Sungmin into such a cold-blooded killer. Jeng, jeng, jeng... But I felt kinda bad for young Siwonnie to go through such a hard life but it had to be done in order for his current possessiveness over Sungmin.

I wanted to make Heechul a little more eccentric in his killings. But I'm facing difficulty in that part so please bear with my with my poor writing skills. Sometimes, I can't seem to potray what is going on in my mind. And yea, he will be in action soon. I will also put on how he joined Kyuhyun's side and of course, Hanchul part as well.

And I laughed at your 'Hankyung + Wookies’ drug VS Siwon = Siwon KO.' Didn't think of that when I wrote it. hahaha... Siwon will do whatever it costs to get Sungmin back.

Thank you!! I will try to update soon. I hope. Thank you for commenting.

mayatheshop79 March 4 2011, 16:31:46 UTC

Girl you killed me :')

Ok So at first I was crying like a baby over Siwon's past
Then I was like super duper excited when I heard about Eunhae and Heechul my bb.. I mean my bad cold-blooded killer xD
Then when Hannie appeared I was like.. yay Hanchul ^^
Then Wookie's drug xD
Ok I'm being a bundle of nerves in here...I'm glad that you promised us you won't abandon this fic cause it's super awesome.. but I want you to take care of your studies too :D
I'll be waiting for your updates no matter how long it will take... harajunko86 Fighting!!!
Unnie loves you <3

harajunko86 March 5 2011, 04:26:32 UTC

Eunhae is kinda ninja in my fic. Hahaha... They will make small appearances sometime in my later chapters but they don't really have a big role. Hanchul will be appearing more frequent now. Hehehe...

Thank you, maya unnie!! Exams are in May but my college has started revision classes now so my study schedule is super full!! sigh...

mayatheshop79 March 5 2011, 11:51:25 UTC

I'm really developing a big thing for the fic...I keep thinking about it everywhere xD... and I'm anticipating all the Kyumin and HanChul that's coming ^^

Oh I understand the exams thing..my exams starts during the last days of April, revision and papers and projects -_- ... hopefully we'll get through this easily and with good results :D

harajunko86 March 5 2011, 13:08:07 UTC

Wow!! I'm flattered. However, I have to say that there's gonna be some more angst. It is within the genre of this story. I've been itching to write about HanChul. Finally, it's coming through... yay!

your exams too? sigh... mine's in may. argh! just went through 6 hours of classes. gonna go to bed now. zzzz

sumomo_yuki March 5 2011, 02:56:17 UTC

Ooo, ad I had expected Death Princess was Heechul~ and hmm
Interesting how Siwon was taken down lol quite literally!! Lol jsjxjkdnjxjdj update soon!! I wanna know what happens to Sungmin!

harajunko86 March 5 2011, 04:23:41 UTC

Death Princess is Heechul.
Wookie just created the drug. XDXD

Because he's too occupied with Sungmin's safety, he didn't realize that he himself was in danger. Next chapter will be back to the main story.

iziz_ellie March 5 2011, 08:39:21 UTC

woohooooo0000!!!!! finally i can do this ( ... )

harajunko86 March 5 2011, 13:17:36 UTC

I like your long comment and am thankful for the fact that it's the first thing you did once you got your lj account. Don't worry about blabbering. I enjoy it when my reviewers enjoy my fic and then tell me about it. It really makes my day and encourage me to write. hahaha ( ... )

libra137 March 6 2011, 13:48:23 UTC

instead of other silent readers who don't even give me their time to comment. sigh... rather discouraging ( ... )

harajunko86 March 7 2011, 10:44:30 UTC

hahaha... it's not cheesy at all. if fact, long comments crack me up. ^_^

well, it is after all an angst fic so Sungmin don't get all appreciated that easily. Sorry but I like to torture my characters a little. Kekeke... Well, it's SiMin (one-sided only) and who doesn't like a little drama in a love triangle relationship? And yeah, Siwon's gonna have it bad. Kinda feel pity for him. Oh well, can't help it. *shrugs*

It'll be kyumin soon. Just not in the way that everyone expects it to be. Keep your fingers croseed.

Thank you for the compliment<3<3 and also good luck for your exams!!