You Dismantle Me [1]

Oct 05, 2009 18:46



Chemistry had always been Brendon’s favorite part of science. Through out middle school, all Brendon thought about in science was mixing chemicals and remembering the periodic table of elements. By the first day of his freshmen year in high school, he could tell you the symbol, atomic mass, and what number any element was. He knew ( Read more... )

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harbored_secret October 6 2009, 22:36:18 UTC
I can tell! And It makes me happy. Wasn't sure how this whole idea would fly with people.
I've come to believe that Brendon is smarter than Ryan actually..

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the_panic_fan October 6 2009, 19:14:22 UTC
("freshmen happen to be" = "freshmen happened to be", "use to everything and learn the" = "used to everything and learned the", "Those where his specialties" = "Those were his specialties", "teacher could even thing" = "teacher could even think", "while eh waited" = "while he waited","I'll Keeping it simple" = "I'm keeping it simple/ I'll keep it simple")
....HI! ^^
I loved those "choose your own adventure" books! except if i didnt like what happened I would just go back and choose the other scenario. I'm guessing i can't do that here though... :/
yay for smart Brendon! :D but who spit in his cheerios this morning? ouch.
awkward!Ryan is the best! except for maybe bitchy!Ryan, cause bitchy Ryan makes me laugh.
uhm, im going to have to choose 'A'. even though it sounds suspiciously like something is going to go wrong and Brendon will fall out Ryan's window.
next one soon? :]

/o\ I'll work on shortening my comments. this is just getting insane.

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harbored_secret October 6 2009, 23:14:48 UTC
Wow a lot of mistakes. My beta is sick so she just skimmed I guess. I just had surgery so I wasn't really trying to be honest. Thank you :)
Nope, no going back this time. Choose wisely.
Haha, maybe Brendon will fall out his window. Sounds like a good plan.

NOO I like your long comments :) they entertain me.

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patdluveremily October 6 2009, 20:59:04 UTC
A! Even though it sounds too easy of a decision. Very cool! Can't wait for the rest!

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harbored_secret October 6 2009, 23:21:49 UTC
Thank you :)

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chaosforever October 6 2009, 21:46:39 UTC
ANSWER:

A.Go And Give It A Shot At Ryan's House And Work Together
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And GO!

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harbored_secret October 6 2009, 23:22:44 UTC
haha, I think I might actually go and write it now.

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chaosforever October 7 2009, 10:21:54 UTC
YAH!

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david_aq October 6 2009, 21:57:39 UTC
woow! this is a really good idea! ^^ i like it! :D

A A A A A A A A A of course! to the cute little boy's house! :D

Paris eh? ... :D

Adiós! :D

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harbored_secret October 6 2009, 23:24:34 UTC
Thank you! :)
But what's going to happen over there? I should make it something terrible...
Yes Paris. :)

Bis Bald ! :D

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