The Chronicles of a Broken Man [SA]

[harbored_secret]

Title: The Chronicles of a Broken Man [SA]
Author harbored_secret
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ryan/Brendon slightly
POV: 3rd, Ryan Centric
Summary: Now he had just a shell of what he used to have.
Disclaimer: As true as my love for the Jonas Brother. And if you have any common sense, you'd know this story is a lie.
Beta: skies_in_vegas
Author Notes: At the end.

Comments

[harbored_secret]

Thank you, thank you, thank you! :)

The Chronicles of a Broken Man [SA]

[bookxbutterfly]

wow. just... WOW.

this is a complete masterpiece (whoa, i don't think i've ever used the word to describe a fic before) and i loved every word. especially this one line, which really struck me:
If something was the way that you wanted it be, would you change it? You work for it and at some point someone tells you that you’ve been hiding for too long, would you accept their escape?

i love how everything just came crashing down slowly towards the end. you established the momentum, and when it hit that turning point -- BOOM! his world fell apart.

i'm just gonna stop myself before this comment gets too long, but before i do, let me just say that i thought this was beautiful, amazing, fantastic, spectacular, brilliant, terrific, and just absolutely breath-taking.

thank you for writing so wonderfully. :)

Re: The Chronicles of a Broken Man [SA]

[harbored_secret]

I'm in like tears at how happy your comment made me. I can't even put into words how inspiring, I guess would be the word, this is to me. Makes me want to write more :)

Thank you beyond belief for he kind words. It means a lot! :]

Re: The Chronicles of a Broken Man [SA]

[bookxbutterfly]

*HUUUG*

it was nothing. i just want to make sure you know you're appreciated. :D

and if you write more, that would be fantastic! :D

and thank you for being so amazing. ;)

[terry_dent]

now i need to try and calm dowm just enough to leave a comment that includes something more than just omygodthatwasreallyreallygreat, though it's the only my thought right now.
This work is utterly great, undoubtedly.
The specific atmosphere of Ryan's mood, his thoughts makes this story very intense.
The wonderful thing is that he remains just the same and blames the others, saying that these are his rules in his world. Amazing. The whole plot is amazing.
Another brilliant thing is such a beautiful language of yours and the way it conveys the feelings, deepening the impression of the complete wreck.
Incredious work.
I feel bad to know you were feeling bad while starting to write it, but still can't be glad to know that it caused this strong story.
Really love it ^^
Thanks a lot!