Comments | hardlyfatal: Bleach fic: Deeper Down

hardlyfatal

Bleach fic: Deeper Down

Jul 17, 2005 15:44

The title doesn't just refer to the act, but how Aizen is dragging Hinamori further into his control.

Rating: NC17
Summary: Aizen tests Hinamori's devotion yet again. Supposes pre-existing sexual relationship between them.
Warning: butt-play

( Deeper Down )

fic, bleach

Comments 39

nutty_scribbler July 17 2005, 21:17:04 UTC

*Hides hot, blushing face*

Ok, the title was VERY literal.
Now I can never look at Hinamori and Aizen the SAME WAY ever again.

*flees*

hardlyfatal July 18 2005, 03:02:44 UTC

Now do you know why I was shy about posting it?

Now I feel weird.

nutty_scribbler July 18 2005, 06:20:01 UTC

It's ok. Still an incredibly well written piece, and you got Aizen and Hinamori's characterization spot on!

You don't have to feel weird; it's just not meant to be read at 5:30 a.m. when one has just woken up from deep sleep. I feel weird when I post smut too (and weirder when my RL friends comments personally to me to tell me it's 'mild')

hardlyfatal July 18 2005, 06:23:03 UTC

I live in fear of two things, when I write:

1) that the humour isn't funny

2) that the smut isn't sexy

Now, with this one, it's meant to be more disturbing than sexy, though if some find it hot, that's good too.

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yankeerose69 July 17 2005, 21:27:27 UTC

Sinfully evil yet so true to what kind of person he was to her. I think you did a really good job for the evil bastard that he is *lol*

hardlyfatal July 18 2005, 03:03:03 UTC

Thanks :)

strawberry_smut July 17 2005, 21:59:46 UTC

OMGOMGOMG *dies*
Gah.... fwibbit... gahhhhhh....
Muse: I think this means she likes it.

hardlyfatal July 18 2005, 03:03:41 UTC

[grin] So the rimming wasn't too quease-making? [wrings her hands anxiously]

strawberry_smut July 18 2005, 07:56:41 UTC

No, it's one on my pet kinks.
Not quease-making in the slightest, I quite liked it. ^_~

_snoogans_ July 17 2005, 23:55:11 UTC

I'll never be able to look at Aizen and Hinamori ever again without giggling like a school girl...damn. Good thing nobody was around when I read this one. This would have made my school friends blush. Nonetheless, good job at showing the evil that is Aizen.

hardlyfatal July 18 2005, 03:04:05 UTC

Rimming = evil, huh? [grin]

esotaria July 18 2005, 01:13:24 UTC

Ooooooh, so very twisted, and so very plausible! XD I applaud you; characterization was marvelous!

hardlyfatal July 18 2005, 03:04:21 UTC

Thank you!