Bleach fic: Deathcherry (nc17)

[hardlyfatal]

Inspired by arafel, here's my pointless-as-I-can-make-it Yoruichi/Ichigo smut. The ending sucks, and I'm not sure if it's clear but they have not fallen in love with each other-- whatever squishy sentiments they feel are merely that rush of OMG I WUV YOU that good sex often brings about.

Comments

[fusaki_aiko]

waa~ i loved it! it was awesome! although the way Ichigo addresses Yoruichi-san is wrong, and personally i dont think she sounded her age ^^; but then again i could be wrong about the latter. Ichigo is very respectful towards her so he always addresses her with a "-san" at the end. hope that helps future fics. can't wait to read another one >3 <3 <3~!

[hardlyfatal]

I tend not to get too into the -san and -kun stuff, as it confuses me. But I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading!

[maiea]

Bleach smut! =D

(damnit, now I'm thinking thoughts of Renji and chick!Zabimaru.)

[andrew_jp]

Ooh, het.

*reads*

And it's good, too!

[hardlyfatal]

Het is sadly rare, isn't it? [is sad]

[narutomonkey]

that...

was great.

XD

[hardlyfatal]

Thank you!

[blackestfaery]

There's just something about alternative pairings that really makes me love them.

IchigoxYoruichi, eh? The idea hit me too, but I wouldn't have ever been able to write something as hot as this *fans self*

I especially liked how Ichigo seemed more... mature? at the end. More in tune with himself, more self-assured. That was what I found the most sexy about him in all of this - though the part of Yoruichi wanting Ichigo covering her takes a close second. She did a good job, the lucky gal ^^

Excellent, excellent work!

[hardlyfatal]

Thanks so much!