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Oct 17, 2008 23:22

Reason
by Harikari

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Part Four

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reason, sylar/mohinder, fanfiction

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samosar October 18 2008, 21:44:38 UTC
Aww...that poor cat. :'(

I know the whole thing with Gabriel is creepy, but that kiss on the cheek had me going "Awwwww!" ^^ Looking forward to more!

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hari_kari October 30 2008, 03:45:47 UTC
Yeah, I struggled a little with the whole cat scenario. :( Thank you very much for commenting!! I hope to have the next part ready to post soon. :D

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bonniesrg October 19 2008, 11:00:23 UTC
Heh Gabriel had to get a kiss in didn't he.
And really that was basically an admission to the cat there wasn't it.

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hari_kari October 30 2008, 19:35:52 UTC
Thank you for commenting!! Heh, yeah, who could resist a sleepy Mohinder? Certainly not Gabriel. ;D Thanks again!

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blossom_starr October 19 2008, 16:59:55 UTC
I really like this story, it's such a nice idea. Though I feel bad for Mohinder because he's even more clueless then usual when it comes to what Gabriel is capeabule of.

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hari_kari October 30 2008, 03:49:02 UTC
Thank you so much for the kind words!! I'm really glad you're liking it. True, poor Mohinder does seem even more naive and clueless than usual here. :)

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megmatthews20 October 21 2008, 18:32:07 UTC
I read this the other day, but I didn't get around to commenting because I had to run, but the last part has been playing through my mind almost every day since I read it.

That kiss. Gabriel holding his ankle. The admission about the cat. You have this amazing way of putting moments into your stories that just...well, suffice it to say I love them and absolutely cannot get enough.

I'm so glad we have this to fill the void since your other brilliant story is wrapped up...(maybe??)

cheers! <3

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hari_kari October 30 2008, 19:38:06 UTC
Thank you so, so much for your kind words. They mean a lot to me. I'm glad you're liking this!! <3

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mabetini October 22 2008, 21:07:02 UTC
"He felt movement (Gabriel shifting), then a moist pressure on his cheek (a kiss, he vaguely noted) before he dropped off."

Oh I just ADORE these fics where they are teens and Gabe is CREEPY! Can't wait for more!

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hari_kari October 30 2008, 19:39:44 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting!! :D Working on the next part now, will hopefully have it posted soon.

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