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hari_kari

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Mar 18, 2009 20:21

Reason
by Harikari

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Part Six

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reason, sylar/mohinder, fanfiction

Comments 12

megmatthews20 March 19 2009, 03:36:39 UTC

That was great, and I can't wait for more. One of the few stories I am always looking forward to.

cheers <3

hari_kari March 19 2009, 23:28:46 UTC

Thank you!! <3

mabetini March 19 2009, 04:13:50 UTC

Awww yay this fic is cute, I love Gabriel in it, so adorkable!

<3

hari_kari March 19 2009, 23:30:06 UTC

Thank you!! Glad your liking it so far. :D

eridanie March 19 2009, 08:21:50 UTC

Oooh. It's just getting so ominous and creepy! I can't wait for more!

hari_kari March 19 2009, 23:31:25 UTC

Thank you for commenting!! I'm working on the next part now, will hopefully have it ready soon. <3

sensitise March 19 2009, 12:42:33 UTC

I WAS THINKING ABOUT THIS FIC YESTERDAY and idly hoping it wouldn't be abandoned because i liked it so much and then came home and re-read it AND LOOK

A NEW CHAPTER

i love you ♥

hari_kari March 19 2009, 23:33:34 UTC

Thanks SO much for the kind words! I'll try and update soon.

I heart you, too! ;D

sensitise March 20 2009, 04:44:23 UTC

i will sit here and wait until it is posted okay
/does this ♥

levitatethis March 19 2009, 13:21:56 UTC

Talk about tension! You played with it really nicely as Mohinder tries to make sense of what he's been told but also put on the spot with everyone suddenly showing up. He has to think fast but he's also nervous and cautious....and suspicious. What Gabriel might see as a win (Mohinder turning down the "double date") is not so clear cut. Seeds of doubt are in Mohinder's head.

I look forward to the next chapter!

hari_kari March 19 2009, 23:38:46 UTC

Thanks so much for commenting, hon!! I'm glad to find the tension shone through. :) I'll try and have the next part up soonish.