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[hari_kari]

The Family Business
by Harikari

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Chapter One: Farewell to Sunnyhell

Comments

[anxiety_junkie]

This is getting interesting! Can't wait til they all find out they do the same thing.

But how long til Spikey comes? Want Spikey! *g*

[hari_kari]

Thanks so much for commenting! Spike will show up in the next chapter for sure. :)

[blue_icy_rose]

I'm definitely liking this! I like that Dean wasn't happy about Xander coming, even though he could remember him, and I like that John ordered him to be nice and that John's doing this because of Mary. And that line about how Sam is looking at Xander is just such a great description because I could picture Sam looking just like that

[hari_kari]

OMG. Thanks so much commenting and double thanks for pointing that mistake out to me - I'm going to change it right now! I just KNEW I was getting something wrong. I kept going over this chap while editting but couldn't figure out what was off about it. Thanks again! *hands blue_icy_rose virtual cookies and candies of thanks* ^_^

[hari_kari]

Oops. Just realized I didn't address the rest of the review. The Scoobies not checking on Xander issue WILL be explained/addressed in the next chapter. Thanks again for the great/helpful/thorough review. :)

[orchidluv]

I like the tensions you are setting up and the different reactions of Sam & Dean to Xander staying there. Loved the description of Xander as a toddler. Going to be interesting to see how long they all manage to hide what they know from each other.

[hari_kari]

Thanks so much for commenting! I really appreciate the feedback. :)

[orchidluv]

I forgot to add, do you mind if I add you to my friends list so I can keep track of the story?

[hari_kari]

Sure! Mind if I add you back? I've been trying to catch up on your fic Nothing the Same and I really love if so far!

[_sharvie_]

Ooo! I just found this on the SPNBtVS comm, so glad I did! This sounds like it's gonna be right up my alley! I can't wait till it all comes out they both share the same secret. I'm practically bouncing with joy! You create such vivid images...love your style. I'll be keeping an eye out for this one. Nice work!

[hari_kari]

Thank you for the kind words! I'll try and get the next chapter out soon. ^_^

[angstpuppy]

Oooh, I like these 2 (3) shows just *fit* together so nicely. Can't wait to see how the boys interact, and how Spike fits into all of this, without getting dusted!
Looking forward to more.

[hari_kari]

Thanks for commenting! I'll try and have the next part out soon. :)