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hari_kari

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Jul 02, 2010 18:33

Part Two

( Mercedes was right, of course. )

the arrangement, puck/kurt, wip, kurt hummel, glee, fanfiction

Comments 38

the_dicethrower July 3 2010, 01:02:25 UTC

Ooh, I'm liking this. I do so like it when Kurt gets bullied (and refuses to back down). Protective Finn and Puck are always awesome too. Can't wait to read more!

hari_kari July 3 2010, 03:30:57 UTC

Thank you!! Glad you're liking it so far. :D

lovelycudy July 3 2010, 01:05:38 UTC

This is getting more and more interesting. Loving it!

hari_kari July 3 2010, 03:31:43 UTC

Thank you!! :D

lezi July 3 2010, 01:05:40 UTC

...I had horrid scenarios building up in my mind near the end, in which someone (Hernandez?) stuffed a) a dead something, b) a bunch of used medical needles, or c) a cheesy Valentine's card into Kurt's locker.
I'm kind of relieved (and curious) that he didn't get a chance to open it after all. :P

Awesome job! I really like this so far. The only criticism I have is the slightly choppy sentence structure, but it doesn't distract/take away from the brill plot. :D

Can't wait for more! ♥

hari_kari July 3 2010, 03:34:51 UTC

Thank you for the kind words and feedback!! LOL, yeah I definitely have sort of a choppy style of writing. Glad you're liking the plot so far, I'll try and have the next part out soon. :D

ontinia July 3 2010, 01:28:37 UTC

This is really good. Interesting. :D

hari_kari July 3 2010, 03:35:23 UTC

Thank you!! ^_^

jigsaws231 July 3 2010, 01:57:23 UTC

Loving this so far. The mystery is killing me!

hari_kari July 3 2010, 03:52:10 UTC

Thank you!! Glad you're liking it so far, I'll try and post the next part soon. :)