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[hari_kari]

Strange Condition
by Harikari

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Part Four

Comments

[mabetini]

Oh my!!!!!

This was so awesome! I can't wait to see where Sylar is taking him! I do hope this guy puts up a fight, maybe tries to take out Mohinder again ^_^ theres nothing hotter than Sylar saving Momo!!
Splee I love this story!
<3

[hari_kari]

Thank so much! I agree - Sylar saving Momo is hot. That's DEFINITELY going to work its way into this story. ;)

[levitatethis]

Even your filler chapters keep me on the edge of my seat :-) I quite enjoy watching Mohinder and Sylar almost on the same side but with the current power discrepency Mohinder is forced to think on his feet, figure out what the hell is going on while not revealing his hand to Sylar. Sylar meanwhile has these other very serious concerns while still keeping a close eye on Mohinder...and for now Mohinder has to play the part of the dutiful captive, side-by-side with Sylar as they move further and further along.

Looking forward to seeing them catch up with this guy and what unfolds.

[hari_kari]

Thank you! Glad to hear my filler/build-up chapter wasn't too boring. I'll try and have the next part written and posted soon. Thanks again for commenting! ^_^

[megmatthews20]

Woot! I love this story. You manage to keep the tension going with every chapter. When I saw you'd put a new section up, I couldn't click on it fast enough.

Looking forward to future chapters, as always!

cheers

[hari_kari]

Thank you! I'm glad you're liking it so far. I'll try and post the next part soon. :)

[fullonswayzeed]

Another awesome chapter! Great work.
I can hardly wait to find out what Harris's power is,
and I'm curious as to who the little girl is.

Poor Mo, always so confused.

I love how in character your Sylar is. :D

♥

[hari_kari]

Thanks so much! I'm really glad that you think my Sylar is in character -- I always fret when I'm writing his dialogue and actions. Thanks for commenting! :)