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[hari_kari]

Strange Condition 
by Harikari

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Part Five

Warm beads of water rained down onto Mohinder's naked skin.  The water flowed in rivulets down his lean body - shoulders, back, legs - before pooling momentarily in the bathtub, disappearing down the drain.

The geneticist suppressed a pleased groan.  The warmth and steady pressure of the water spraying

Comments

[widestance75]

This was just great. When Sylar said Why do you do this? Why do you always ruin us? I died. Yep, I'm dead now.

Great job, definitely looking forward to more!

[hari_kari]

*revives you* Thanks so much! :D I'm glad you're liking it so far - I'll try and have the next part ready and posted soon.

[fullonswayzeed]

*continues loving this story* ^_^
Great work. And, aw, I loved their interactions in this.

[hari_kari]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! ^_^

[neshel]

*squees*

I love this story and this part was the best so far!!!

I'd wondered if that notebook was a sketchbook, even moreso after that scene a while back where Sylar was seemingly enthralled by it. *giggles* So its really cool to be sorta right.

Mohinder's reaction was just wonderfully confused and, ya, I love your characterizations.

“It’s not supposed to be this way,” ... “You weren’t supposed to see. Why do you do this? Why do you always ruin us? Why can’t you…”
I love this bit. Poor Sylar! He just wants to figure out how to make that drawing come true so he can be happy with his Mo!

Sylar biting Mo was unbelievably hot for such a small little moment. *is all tingly*

Sylar losing control, very IC; him stopping when Mohinder was well and truly frantic with panic? Awesome.

*bounces*

Can't wait for the next part!

[hari_kari]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're liking it so far. I'll try and have the next part out soon. :D

[scarletfbl]

Dang! My heart was beating so fast as I was reading this.

[brandinsbabe]

damn, this fic is amazing!!! i tried to wait till the end to comment but i couldnt help myself! i LOVE the dynamic you've created between them. its so true to character, and thats what i love most about it. and i love seeing sylar acting so sure but yet not really sure at all. *keeps reading*

[hari_kari]

Wow, thank you so much for all your kind words! I'm glad you're liking it so far and hope you enjoy the rest. Thanks again!! <3