First Kiss

[hari_kari]

Title:  First Kiss
Author: Harikari
Pairing: Jesse & Xander
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Don't own em'.
Warnings: Underage kissing, pre-slash/friendship, some strong language, angst, fluff.  Spoilers for season one and possible spoilers for elements of all later seasons.
AN: I set out to write a Spander fic that involved hacking apart demons and Angel,

Comments

[blackeyedwicca]

Oh man, sad but really beautiful too.

[hari_kari]

Thanks so much!

[davinci_1985]

So beautiful and bittersweet. I loved the interacton and how they look so in tune.

Also, Jesse's protectiveness.

It's a wonderful piece, and I enjoyed it inmensely.

[hari_kari]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[jasonsnene]

That's amazing!! Beautfiully done.

[hari_kari]

Thanks so much!

[biting_moopie]

This is gorgeous, comforting and heartbreaking at the same time. You also did a wonderful job fleshing out Jesse's character. Excellent work.

[biting_moopie]

You can delete this comment if you want. Is there a typo in the line "Jesse's breath had smelled of cinnamon gun? Should it be "gum"? Please ignore this comment if I am wrong.

[hari_kari]

Yes! Thank you for pointing that out, that is a typo. I'll change it right now, thanks. :)

[hari_kari]

Thank you!

[mireille719]

Oh, this was excellent!

[hari_kari]

Thanks so much!