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[hari_kari]

Strange Condition 
by Harikari

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Part Seven

Comments

[megmatthews20]

I was SOOOO HAPPY to see a new chapter of this up!

I am incredibly intrigued by the events so far in this story. One of those chapter fics in Mylar that I can't click on fast enough. :) The train of thought you have going for Mohinder is so riveting, the events, wondering what Sylar will do, how far he'll go to hurt Mohinder...and now...

How far he'll go to protect him. Sylar catching Mohinder and helping him to sit down before moving to attack Harris just melted my heart in a good way. I love this, I mean, seriously love it. I feel so comfortable diving into this story. I kinda don't want it to end, but I thoroughly look forward to the next two chapters.

OMG, I really hope Mohinder is okay...but something tells me that the events in that drawing of Sylar's may yet possibly come to pass *hopes hopefully*

cheers and much love for this!

[hari_kari]

Thank you so much for your kind words! :D I'm working on the next chap already and will try to finish it up and post it as soon as possible. Thanks again! <3

[anonymous]

:O Thank you very much for next part :D I need mooooore :D

*hopes that Mohinder is okay* .......

[hari_kari]

Thanks so much for commenting! I'll have the next part up as soon as possible. :D

[levitatethis]

I'm so excited to read the next chapter to this story! And what a great one at that. The atmosphere you establish from the start really puts the reader in Mohinder's shoes of not knowing what the hell is going on but trying to decipher it anyway. I like how you work this out step by step, from Mohinder trying to figure out why they're outside this building to him realizing that Sylar is "listening" to guessing that Sylar is there to kill someone. Mohinder's not necessarily correct on all counts, but I love the idea of his mind working so fast to make sense of what's going on around him. He's not some passive character

[hari_kari]

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked the end - I was attempting leave the reader hanging (a cliffhanger) when it came to the action taking place and the Harris mystery (it's right on the edge of being revealed), so to hear you were on the edge of your seat makes me really happy. Thanks so much for your kind comment/words! :D

[neshel]

OMG NEW CHAPTER!

Sooo excited to see this, but gah! Poor Mohinder!

[hari_kari]

Thank you for commenting! I'll have the next chap out as soon as possible (I'll try not to leave poor Mohinder hanging for too long...). :)

[bloody_beary]

Wonderful chapter! Please continue! Mohinder is bleeding, gah!

[hari_kari]

Thank you! I'll have the next chapter up as soon as possible. :D