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[hari_kari]

Strange Condition
by Harikari

AN:  Here's the end.  Much thanks to everyone who has commented/reviewed.  You all are what makes writing and posting fanfiction worth it.  Thanks, everyone!  I hope you enjoy.

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Part Nine

Comments

[megmatthews20]

Okay, I'm gonna comment on this part first as though I didn't just dart on through to the epilogue demanding mooooooooooooaaaaaar!

This. was. WONDERFUL!

As I told you before, this story is one of my all times favorites...because it is so easy to just get swept up, and immerse myself in it! I love how even though Mohinder is overpowered, and overwhelmed, he's able to pull it together enough to step into a morally gray, but ever so important territory that involves shooting Harris in order to save everyone else...and doing it in time to save Sylar...the necessary and familiar evil...

Sylar stood. Shot a look at the geneticist, brows raised and whispered, "That's my boy." Looooooove this line! It's vaguely condescending, and yet, so very Sylar. Like he was waiting for Mohinder to do this, he knew what was to come, and he's downright happy about it, damnit!

And them kissing in the snow is one of the sexiest visuals...EVER!

I'm off to gush over the epilogue now!

cheers! <3!!

[hari_kari]

Thank you so much. I'm really, really glad you liked it. And I'm glad you liked that line! I kind of hesitated over putting it in, but knowing you think it sounds very Sylar makes me glad I left it in. <3

[bonniesrg]

Haha Sylar would bite his lip at the end, instead of a soft kiss...kinky bastard.

And I love Sylar protecting Momo, and then the reverse where it's Momo who saves Sylar. And how Momo was going to push away when Sylar kissed him, but as soon as his tongue entered his mouth he was a gonner.

[hari_kari]

Hee! He is a kinky bastard, isn't he? ;)

I'm really glad you liked the whole Sylar protects Mohinder saves Sylar thing, and the fact that Mohinder fell helpless to Sylar's kiss as soon as tongue entered the equation. :D

[levitatethis]

What an absolutely fantastic fight scene. They're not the easiest to write and when powers are involved it can be this precarious line of being clear with what's going on while also figuring out reactions, legitimate counter attacks, and how it would end

[hari_kari]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked the fight scene - I love writing action/fight scenes, so I'm happy to hear what you thought about it. Also glad you liked the fact that Mohinder intervenes (I feel the same way about movies/shows that don't utilize a third party when they can, it's very frustrating), and thought the balance in the kissing scene was nice. Thank you for all your kind words. :)

[brandinsbabe]

that was an amazing fight scene you've written there! i dont see a lot of those in fics and its really refreshing.

this was such a wonderful ending to an amazing fic. i love seeing sylar and mohinder interacting like this. its such a love/hate thing and its fantastic.

god, i want to write more but im dying to read the epilogue! lol

[hari_kari]

Thank you so much for your kind words! :) I'm glad to hear you liked the fight scene (I really enjoy writing fight scenes, so I'm happy it turned out okay) and the love/hate interaction.

[mabetini]

Jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeezuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum

Sylar stood. Shot a look at the geneticist, brows raised and whispered, "That's my boy."

Best....line....ever.

I freaking love this!!! *Goes the read the epilogue*

[hari_kari]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked that line. :D