214. (fic) dreaming with a broken heart

[harinezumi_kun]

title: dreaming with a broken heart
rating/genre: g; drabble, angst
pairing(s): juntoshi
words: 294
summary: when you're dreaming with a broken heart/the waking up is the hardest part
disclaimer: FICTION.
notes: listening to john mayer's song of the same name as the title, and just...had a drabble. angsty, weird formatting. uh. yeah.

Comments

[g_esquared]

oh, crap. i, ugh.

the way the realization came about here was great, perfectly timed, delicate enough not for this to be categorized as angst. i loved the transition from italics to not, and how jun holds on to tiny markers like not having heard the door shut, and drawing hope from that. but most of all i love abstract confusions between dreams and reality, that disorientation is something i so rarely see in fic, but it was used perfectly here.

also: ohmiya wedding -- i am properly checking this out for the first time and i must say i'm tempted. UGH. SO TEMPTED.

[harinezumi_kun]

aaaahhhh i'm glad you liked it ;_; i think that was my top priority here, capturing that feeling of waking up from one of those really realistic dreams that you just can't shake for a few moments...

re: ohmiya wedding: DO IT.

also, unrelated to anything in this comic: i need to have words with you, young lady! i went looking for "the moments slept" this morning 'cause it's great and i wanted to read it, but i couldn't find it D: where is it? i mean, if you took it down, of course that's totally your prerogative, but if it's still on the internets somewhere, i'd really like to be able to read it ;_; and some of the other older ones, too, seem to be missing...um. yeah XD /creep

[harinezumi_kun]

"in this comic"??? wtf. i think what i meant was "comment" XD

[g_esquared]

lmao i thought it was an expression, actually. gosh. :3

kshiying has totally had these words with me when i locked everything earlier than nov'09 because quite frankly all my old writing makes me want to cry? HOWEVER because it is you and because i am rather touched that you remember that piece, i can pdf it and send it to you!

alsoooo, ohmiya wedding -- i want to! i have no idea how to use either theme, though. SADFACE.

Here is my completely ineloquent comment:

[mokarran]

T____________________T My feeeelllls *clutches chest*

oh my GOD what did you do to me? weird formatting? more like perfect formatting! god just... JUN ;~~~; and ohno's little smile and why, why should he be sad to see Ohno smile like that? and gahh ;______; it's so dream-like yet emotional and perfect and and T____T

T________T I need something to distract me from this now so I don't go to bed with my HEART BREAKING thx...

I probably have way too many Juntoshi feels than is allowed for a person claiming to be an Ohmiya shipper :////

... Ohmiya wedding? *checks it out* XDDD okay so I could have 10 days to design a header? Heh. But yes I am always happy to be a sounding board!

Re: Here is my completely ineloquent comment:

[harinezumi_kun]

oh no, your feeeels, i'm sorry T_T i...i understand. the juntoshi feels. you can try to deny them, but they always get you in the end XD

YOU SHOULD DO THE WEDDING, EVERYONE SHOOOULLD :D :D and i will probably hit you up on that offer in the near future :D

Re: Here is my completely ineloquent comment:

[mokarran]

(Gah now I'm back and I read it again because I couldn't help it ;____;)

That is the exact nature of Juntoshi feels :< And they have gotten me tonight :<<

I will try :D Have to look through my scans & stuff, see what I can do ^^ It's their 5-year anniversary after all ;)

Yay! You know where to find me :)

[yuuki_73]

Oh my! That hurt so much! 💀

Angst JunToshi are the worst!