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harkk

After Life

Oct 23, 2010 04:13

Title: After Life
Pairing: Jongkey
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,447
A/N: So, I don't know why I wrote this when I'm on hiatus and have exams in 2 weeks time. D: Comments very much appreciated! (:

( Jonghyun couldn’t decide which was worst, the whimpering sounds behind him, the sharp jabs aimed at his sides or the yellow pants Kibum’s wearing. )

fanfic: jongkey

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harkk October 23 2010, 14:10:48 UTC

I'M NOT AWESOME!

D: don't cry! /hands tissues.

thanks for commenting dear. (:

flyfallcrash October 23 2010, 04:00:03 UTC

I'd write something more but I really suck at commenting. This was really nice and idk, pretty. It idk omg. #awkward. I just really liked it.

harkk October 23 2010, 14:16:02 UTC

your whole comment reminds of my friend. i can really imagine her saying that so, no you're not awkward at all. :DD

i'm glad you liked dear. thanks so much for commenting even though you didn't know what to say. ♥

0nesummersday October 23 2010, 04:49:17 UTC

Ohh.. D:
I'm crying :( this is so sad.
T__T I love it, thank you.

harkk October 23 2010, 14:22:14 UTC

ayee i'm gonna run out of tissues. /hands last piece over.

i'm glad you still liked! :DDD

thanks for the comment dear. (;

mad_nux October 23 2010, 05:37:25 UTC

YOU.
made me cry.
oh my heart. T_____________T

Kibum throws a quick glance at the old man on the couch before pouring himself a glass of water. “But I want you to sing to me every day when I die.” Kibum says, not looking at Jonghyun as he drinks from the glass.

“Why would you want that? I thought you said I sucked.”

“So I can laugh at you even after I die.”

“What if I die before you?”

Kibum contemplates for a moment before answering.

“Then I’d dance in front of your grave every day.”
I want to laugh at the jongkey but it made me depressed as fuck. T____________________________T

beautiful work <3333333

harkk October 23 2010, 14:27:37 UTC

;____; why you cry! and i just ran out of tissues so hmm, here. /hands handkerchief. (handkerchiefs are cool kay)

aye aye that part isn't even supposed to be depressing! D: though it probably is since it's just a flashback and then it's back to the harsh reality that Kibum's gone and- eh, what am i saying. D:

thanks for commenting dear. <33

r_hr_maniac October 23 2010, 10:27:54 UTC

Oh damn that's...okay, I'm not capable of being coherent today, which is a pity because I'd say more if I was, but it's beautiful. There's something beautifully heartbreaking in Jonghyun's complete devotion even after Kibum died. I mean, he spends his whole day at his grave, that's just...yeah, vocab ran away with coherency. Just know that the interaction between them is wonderful and that I love it. ♥

harkk October 23 2010, 14:42:43 UTC

/hugs. Am glad you pointed out the devotion on Jonghyun's part. Was trying to make it as subtle as possible since well, it's like a habit for Jonghyun. And as much as I love Jongkey, it's inevitable that one of them dies first, no? And the very idea of oldwrinklygrumpy!jongkey intrigues me so- yeaaaaah IDK WHAT I'M SAYING ANYMORE.

Am glad you liked and still commented despite your erm, incoherency. Heh. Thank youuuu. ♥