And he gave that smile the way he knows

[harkk]

Title: And he gave that smile the way he knows
Pairing: Jongkey
Rating: PG 16 for mild mild swearing and sexual references
Word Count: 208
A/N: first jongkey ever. i fail so much. DX comments are really much appreciated. /hides in embarrassment.

Comments

[siaht]

I really love everything I read in this. Please let it be more soon.

/stops controlling herself

aklgsdkljagdgajklkahs ♥

[harkk]

(inserts mega huge toothy grin despite hideously flushed face) am really really glad that you liked this. i was so nervous. DX

keysmash is ♥. XDD you make me so happy! and i'm such a fan of your writing. /waves banner.

thanks so much for reading and commenting dear! it really meant alot. <3

[weerainbow]

wow, you're taking steps into the unknown craziness of shinee?? i know so little about them myself...i think i see them as little boys hehe.

but this was some lovely writing as always, the way they tease each other (yes, both of them) is just cute enough to still be a little cute but also sexy enough to be hot ;o) nice balance!
<333

p.s. i'm sleepy so i feel like my comment isn't very great so...*grabs you and squishes you like your my favourite teddy*

[harkk]

you have no idea how surprised i am to see your comment. *_* and heh it's okay, i'm new to the shinee world too. ^^;

guuh your comment always makes me asjkdfgh. am super glad you found this okay. i'm really no good at writing this kind of genre. DX

and bb, the mere fact that you commented is good enough for me, especially since you're not really into the shinee fandom. really appreciate it dear. <33 /snuggles like a teddy.

[weerainbow]

I came back to tell you I am now officially a fan of SHINee...it happened yes! And the fact that my favourite pair is exactly what you had already written is just perfect!! We're definitely great minds thinking alike ;o)
I'm now definitely hoping you'll be writing more JongKey in future ♥ (and I think I'm kinda over seeing them as little boys...oh dear...lol)

p.s. i miss u

[dori_echizen]

I loved this sentence
'My pleasure Jjong, my pleasure' *O*
asdasdasd sexy that I imagine
Kibum all seductor *-*
Jonghyun character is so hot <3 *w*

[harkk]

:DD am glad you liked! was wondering if the last line was abit awkward. /: and thank goodness i didn't spoil jongkey's characters here. was really afraid. X:

thanks so much for the comment dear! it means alot. <3

[dorkyy_azn0221]

FAIL??? this is why i dont even attempt to write fics... you people and your amazing writing -_____-
welcome to the shinee world :D

[harkk]

!! this IS fail! and my writing is seriously nowhere near amazing. its rather mediocre, in my opinion. /nods

and what do you mean you don't atempt to write! you should! you should you should you should! /chants.

:DD thanks for reading and commenting dear! means alot. <3 (and idk why but when you said 'welcome to the shinee world', i feel like adding 'sparkling' at the back. X:)

[dorkyy_azn0221]

aldkfjl well i think this was well written :D
ehh maybe i will... someday 0.o
hehe shinee does sound a tad bit lame. it makes me think of shiny, sparkling things too =P

[harkk]

:DDD yay for thumbs up! /claps excitedly.

and am really glad you liked that line. was wondering if it was abit awkward. X:

thanks so much for reading and commenting dear, it means so much. <3