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Destiny's Savage Heart by danceswithgary (Part 1 of 2)

Mar 23, 2007 17:46

Title: Destiny's Savage Heart (Part 1 of 2)
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 21,492
Cover: Cover #2
Summary: The sky. The sea. Their destiny.

Written for the 2007 SV Harlequin Challenge

Notes: This story is very loosely based on the legends surrounding the colonization of Roanoke Island, Virginia in the late 1600's and my interpretation of Native ( Read more... )

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Comments 18

dana_aeryn March 28 2007, 11:35:21 UTC

I love this story. It is very well written and I love the attention you paid to details from the show.

dana_aeryn March 28 2007, 18:33:34 UTC

It's nice to have the details appreciated! Thanks!

question dana_aeryn March 30 2007, 10:29:10 UTC

I'm re-reading this and noticed that it says december 1586 for when Lex is back in England. Shouldn't it be 1585? because right after that it says march,1586.

Re: question dana_aeryn March 30 2007, 10:29:51 UTC

Forgot to sign in above.

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norwich36 April 1 2007, 06:52:35 UTC

Wow, I love all the amazing period and cultural details in this story--it really makes it seem very realistic. I particularly loved little bits like K'El's adoptive parents interpreting the ship as an egg he cracked open, and the way you translated Smallville characters like Cassandra into Native American culture. And this is a gripping story, too--I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!

norwich36 April 1 2007, 18:50:01 UTC

I had a great time researching Native American culture, glad it worked for you. Thanks!

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anonymous April 6 2007, 21:04:33 UTC

Poor broken heart. *gently hugs* I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I loved writing it. Thanks!