[DGM] A Twisted Knot

[harmony283]

A Twisted Knot
For: dgm_fuh_q Round 11!
Pairing: Kanda/Madarao
Summary: [AU] in a world where a caste system is everything Madarao isn't looking for perfection. He isn't looking for Kanda  either, but he found him anyway.
A/N: What. Is. This. I don't even--yeah okay. So this idea I will admit ran away from me really, really fast and I wrote most of it

Comments

[a1y_puff]

Annnd I'm a little too hungry to comment properly, but--aha, I got what you meant by snippet of a bigger work :3 but yeah, it has an interesting setting, with the system and all o.o

I'm not familiar with Madarao's characterization to begin with though, so I can't say much about it, but I kinda like their interaction. And as for the fic itself, I stil like the way you left so many things unsaid but hinting them here and there.

And before I make even less sense, I think I should stop XD

Oh but the lemon-ish part? You've just won hakasha's challenge of writing smut without the word "cock" or anything like that. Congratz!! XD but oh, I still found it hot with the little things like Kanda's hair brushing Madarao's skin and all that :3

and I think this is how, more or less, I'd want to write my lemon(ish) for my YW universe o.o

[harmony283]

poor youuuuu XD; *pats your empty stomach* and yeah I --don't even know where half of this came from but --I was happy XD I just hope I didn't overtly confuse anyone with this since my brain can go into overdrive with small little details XD

Huh yeah for me he's pretty much second nature now, though I am using a softer side of him than I normally would, but I'm portraying him slightly...younger(?) in this so that's probably why XD;

D'aww well when you get more food in your stomach you can talk about more? *patapats yew*

she had a challenge like that...? Huh XD; but yeah I don't usually like even ...using those words because pfff yeah you know what it is. But I'd rather use them in place of some fancy euphemism because those are bound to make me laugh XD; But oh? You did? :'D that's good at least. Wanted it to be somewhat enjoyable~

Ah? Well then I can definitely help ya there if ya want. :3 Since yeah I'm used to writing this kind of lemon if I have to write one myself XD

[nherizu]

Surprisingly this pairing could work for me, lol. Or maybe it isn't really surprising since I like almost every pairing? xD;

But anyway, I like your style here, it's kinda different with the ones a1y_puff often show me (yeah your RP excerpts xDD).

[harmony283]

Pfff XD Yeah I read something on the kink meme with the prompt '4 people Kanda slept with and one he did not' (or something?) and Madarao was the one he didn't sleep with, and just--their interaction there was interesting so xD;

Pairing neutrality = WIN <3

Heheh thanks XD Yeah my style changes just slightly depending on the characters/what kind of AU it is/or if it's AU at all--that sort of thing XD Which RP excerpts has she shown ya? :3

[nherizu]

lol really, kink meme's prompts never fail to amuse me xD

Oh she showed me various RPs excerpts xD;;
The one that I really remember till now is the one in which Allen loved Kanda and they got into a.. date? in a restaurant where lenalee worked at? xD
(and the lemon? the one that Allen couldn't come by hand only? pffft so amusing xD)

[harmony283]

pff yeah I mean there are actually some really, really well written ones (if ya care to look hard enough) and it makes me happy sometimes when I read them xD

Ahhh okay XD yeah we've got so many now I'm like 'which one is that again....?' *shakes head* glad you're enjoying them at least? XD