Comments | harryhermione: and this is what comes with no sleep and the prompt "green"....what do you guys think of it?

fidgetgirl in harryhermione

and this is what comes with no sleep and the prompt "green"....what do you guys think of it?

Apr 09, 2006 06:40

and here it is, because, well, yeah...it just came out of my fingers, and just ended like two minutes ago. seriously. no joke. and i can't say anything else, so here it is ( Read more... )

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mononwalker April 9 2006, 14:25:22 UTC

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

calmacil_20 April 9 2006, 17:24:48 UTC

Very well written! My favorite color's green, so needless to say, I really enjoyed this =) I love how much you put into it! Well done.

forluck_yousaid April 13 2006, 06:27:42 UTC

Lovely. I really liked it. It made me smile :-)

justanotherfan2 July 9 2006, 07:17:02 UTC

Your ficlette was the main reason I went through the process of being a member of this community. It was just great. I love that you found inspiration in your favorite shoes, that's genius.

"But that wasn't good enough for whoever created them." I think that is one of the best lines ever. That made the post incredibly intimate. What a great touch.

I think H/Hr shippers work harder to make the ship come alive, I've always felt that wat. You just reaffirmed it to me. Thanks. ;)

fidgetgirl July 10 2006, 02:39:34 UTC

oh wow. just wow. that is, by far i think, the absolute BEST comment i've ever gotten on anything that i've written. that this piece that i wrote in like ten or twenty minutes was one of the reasons why you decided to join this community. just....wow. thank you for that, seriously. i haven't written anymore h/hr stuff since this piece really, nothing post-worthy, bordering on nothing at all. i've been personally computerless for over a month and that's just been remedied with the arrival of my new laptop, so hopefully i'll be churning out some more ficlettes for my fanfic100 challenge of h/hr, which this was one of. so yeah. anyway, i so agree with you in the comment that h/hr shippers really work harder than every other ship group to make their ship come alive. i see it time and time and time again with almost every h/hr piece i read, though i haven't had the chance to read many at all here lately, despite it being summer and me being home from college for the summer....anyway, thanks so much again and again and again. hope you're ( ... )

justanotherfan2 July 10 2006, 02:53:41 UTC

I've noticed that most readers won't comment on 'drabbles'. Personally, I think drabbles are harder to write than standard fics. Less planning, spur of the moment, first thing that comes to mind, and limited space for telling can be daunting. You did well and I was compelled to say so.

I'm serious about why I initially joined, check the 'Why I want to join' threads. :D

However, I found many other reasons to want to be a part of HarryHermione as well. Oddly enough, my laptop came in last month after I was without a system for about 5 weeks! It was hell, serious torment. :D I'm glad you're hooked up now.

I am having a good day, mostly. Thanks! Will you be posting the rest of your ficletts here as well?

About the H/Hr ship...it annoys the hell out of my friends. *sniggers* I don't have a ship. I like them all (-slash, not my thing).

Anyhoo. Expect more reviews. I try to stay concrit if there's something I think you might care to hear.

You have a great evening!

JAF

fidgetgirl July 10 2006, 04:10:43 UTC

i do plan on posting the other ficlettes here, as well as my writing journal and my regular journal and several other h/hr communities, and at fanfic100 since that's the challenge i have over there. i'm about to go dig around in my room in my cd pile for the hp fanfiction cd where i hopefully have all of my hp fiction stored so i can download it here onto my new computer, and so hopefully i'll be up and running with that sometime soon. lets hope my inspiration hasn't died in this almost two month period i've been personal computerless, lol. anyway, i understand with the being all ships. i can be, but i really do lean more towards this one for whatever reason. it's just the thought of them with, well, i won't get started on my reasoning for h/hr, lol, i'll bore you to death. take care, hope you keep on enjoying the stuff you read here and everywhere else. there are loads of great hp fanfic writing communities separated by various ships and just general ones as well out there. take care.

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justanotherfan2 July 12 2006, 04:08:44 UTC

Psst! Hey this is the only real way I know how to chat at you. I have a one shot H/Hr that I would love for you to read over for me. It's not terribly long and I'll take all the concrit you can throw at me!

JAF

fidgetgirl July 12 2006, 13:03:01 UTC

yeah, sure, that sounds just find, send it on over to me somehow, by a link to where it is if anywhere or through email (cassemr6@salem.edu or if that one doesn't go through for some reason, ecassedy@gmail.com should work)...i've also got yahoo messenger (fidgetgrrl) and aim (yoursundercover) if either one of those ways works for you and you can catch me online. anyway, i've got to go reply to this email from my grandmother and then i'm off to work (UGH! :-( not looking forward to it today, today is stocking day, blerg) hope you're doing well and having a good day. i'm looking forward to hearing from you again and reading your piece you want me to critique. take care.