Exploring The Spectrum - nc-17- by gala_apples

Mar 01, 2010 00:09

Title: Exploring The Spectrum
Author: gala_apples
Artist: hollyboo2001
Summary: Ron wakes up to find he can only see in a single colour.
Rating: nc17
Words: 22 047
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended. All characters engaging in sexual activity are 16 years or ( Read more... )

2010, artist:hollyboo2001, rating:nc-17, author:gala_apples

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gala_apples April 4 2010, 21:23:44 UTC
ron's relationship advice wasn't the shining nugget hermione's might have been, his was just basic 'stop being stupid and go have sex'. because ron is a guy, and that's what all my friends are like. very bottom line. thus guys are easier to understand.

i think, after trying to fight DE's and nearly getting killed (my not very much shown shortened summer war was far more violent than JKRs) while trying to make a very sick ron last, all three of their personalities would change a bit. i hope that harry and ron's closeness (the scene with harry reminded ron how to breathe, etc) didn't come off as preslash, i just wanted it to be very close friendship.

thanks for commenting!

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innibis March 9 2010, 16:30:53 UTC
But he's been sleeping for almost twenty-four hours, and it doesn't matter if it's far too early to exist, Ron's awake.

This makes me laugh - only teen aged boys wouldn't be concerned about one of their supposedly healthy friends sleeping straight through the day - hung over or not.:)

But he can't. The reason Ron's burden would be lighter is because Harry would be shouldering it, and Ron won't do that. Harry's carried enough since birth that he's got shoulders of steel. It's only in the last few months that he's started to relax again, and Ron refuses to be the one that brings the stress back in.

Aww. So sweet. So. . . stupid.

She's got an anti-hovering charm so he'll keep walking forward until he's in the room and under her gaze.

That's such a great idea!

"No? Let me-" she's in mid-sentence when she touches his arm and drops like a sack of potatoes to the floor.

Well that's a problem.

"I don't have them, I grow them. There's a difference, and since when does me growing plants surprise anyone?" It's hard to think of Neville ( ... )

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gala_apples April 4 2010, 21:26:59 UTC
ohhhh, a long comment. awesome.

teenage boys not caring is True Facts, at least in my spectrum of RL. and it's also True Facts they don't like to share their problems. *shakes fist at stupidity*

r/s and h/r are the most canon of unstated ships in the books, i quite agree it's inevitable.

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capitu March 20 2010, 21:57:17 UTC
From the second I started reading I knew this was going to become one of my harry/ron all time favourite.

I haven't finished yet, but I wanted to tell you that. :D

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gala_apples April 4 2010, 21:27:26 UTC
dude, from the mod of the first comm i joined, when i joined livejournal, that's a pretty fucking awesome compliment. thanks!

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tribebohemian March 21 2010, 15:54:01 UTC
I. Freakin. LOVE. This ( ... )

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gala_apples April 4 2010, 21:33:50 UTC
YOUR COMMENT MAKES ME SO HAPPY ( ... )

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nakeefeet March 24 2010, 03:48:42 UTC
What a wonderful, plotty story!

Poor Ron suffered beautifully, and Harry and Hermione were brilliant.

Great work!

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gala_apples April 4 2010, 21:34:28 UTC
thank you. hermione took a bit of a backseat in my story, but i'm glad the portions with her make her shine.

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