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King Hereafter - NC-17 - by rosina_alcona

Mar 01, 2011 18:50

Title: King Hereafter
Author: rosina_alcona
Summary: it is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing. With blow jobs.
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 22,821
Disclaimer: Not mine, unfortunately.
Other Pairings: Ron/Hermione, mention of Harry/Ginny, RANDOM GAY TERRY BOOT
Author's Note: Many thanks to emmacmf, the most patient of betas. shocolate sent me ( Read more... )

author:rosina_alcona, 2011, rating:nc-17

Comments 11

lyras March 2 2011, 09:06:07 UTC

God, those tree stumps were freaky.

God, Ron had a nice bum.

God, I love you.

"Hermione, USE MAGIC," Harry yelled

Oh, phew!

I love your foul-mouthed Ron. He can swear at me any time.

"I think my virginity just came back," he said.

"Your…OW!" yelled Harry, joining Ron on the ground. "Why the fuck has mine grown back too? What's Hermione said to Ginny?"

BRB, LOLing forever.

And then the getting together scene - SO sweet.

The hope in Ron's eyes was too much for Harry to bear. Because Harry knew prophesies didn't work like that.

Prophesies were cruel.

*sniffle*

(Also, psst: it's prophecy. Prophesy is the verb.)

Oh, your hurty, loving and lovely boys. <3

I love the clay chess men! So fitting for Ron, and so effectively described.

"It's still only Saturday," he said, his eyes brightening. "We can still make it for Hermione's elf thing! Come on, Harry."

Yay Ron!

"You've got together!" she said, clasping her hands and tearing up.

"Hermione…" Ron said, squirming. Hee! And aw ( ... )

maevemist March 2 2011, 10:35:10 UTC

This is wonderful, brillant, fabulous and all other things, good.

I laughed. I teared up. I had to stop reading half way through the sex scene because my eyes literally glazed over with the hottness. The plot was truly outstanding, I loved every word of it.

If it were possible I would give you a standing ovation for this, it is simply that good. Well done. :D

(I wish I had more synomyms in my everyday vocabulary for the word good.)

emmacmf March 4 2011, 18:50:05 UTC

Oh, you are amazing! I love this so much - cod-fucker and unlucky mate, and gutted, and cod-fucker, and gorgeous, confident Ron, and perfect trio dynamic and absolutely spot-on dialogue, and wonderful, intricate time-travel, and this is perfect.

I was going to quote stuff, but I was only 2000 words in and at six pages in word, so gave up, because I was quoting the whole thing.

♥

yenny2206 March 6 2011, 03:38:35 UTC

I just love my Red Knight! Ron was just wonderful in this fic. I love how he was portrayed, kind, brave, and just so awesome. You made the story work, Macbeth and Harry Potter wonderful mix and with a happy ending, which is always the best.

Harry was lovesick over his Ron, it was funny and wonderful. AMAZING JOB!!!

plotbunniofdoom March 8 2011, 15:34:33 UTC

Harry went to the bar for a couple of pints and a bag of pork scratchings, because Ron loved them. And he loved Ron. Then he bought another bag in case Ron thought Harry was being weird only getting one for him, and realised he was in love with him. He couldn't have that. He was English, after all.

I love this bit so much. :)

I love the plotiness!

"Get a move on," said Ron, clambering back out of the stream and into his jeans. "We're saving the world later, and I need a bacon sandwich first."

So Ron. xD

Oh, I love the changing the past bit! Very clever.

"Bilius?" Harry heard Lady Macbeth say as they apperated, "Such a nice name…"

lol Nice one Ron! xD

And then, out of the theatre and into the sunshine, and out on the street where anyone could see, Ron kissed Harry. He kissed him hard enough and thoroughly enough that a theatre handyman on a ladder yelled 'get a room.'

Yay! *G*

What a great story! I thoroughly enjoyed this!