Comments | hartbrakehazrad: freewriting with direction, or 'mostly' freewriting

hartbrakehazrad

freewriting with direction, or 'mostly' freewriting

Jun 20, 2005 00:59

so in my continued pursuit of writing skill, i have decided to take direction with my flow of words, less like a river, more like an artist's brush painting the path of my own private river (airfield/idaho)

what follows is part one of of how i have come to date Marie. subtitle: On who i was a week ago sorry it's so long, i figured that's another ( Read more... )

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anonymous June 20 2005, 12:29:00 UTC

I dont know how many people believe that it is out of your character to date, seeing as you have before. I feel that it is out of your character in how you seem to not take dating as serious as you may have before.

hartbrakehazrad June 20 2005, 14:23:26 UTC

yeah, im not sure if its out of character either, but it is an irrational fear of mine that everyone else finds it out of character

and oddly enough, in some ways i think i'm taking this more seriously than before, though i get what you mean about how it seems less serious than before.

mactoplac June 20 2005, 15:28:12 UTC

Hey, c'mon man! Give us overzealous fundamentalists a break. We're higher-strung than you are and if we don't get to change our character once in a while, we'll snap like overtaut violin strings.

hartbrakehazrad June 20 2005, 17:03:08 UTC

sausage, neither you nor i are overzealous fundamentalists, though we both previously were, hehe. as i'll get into, my strictness of character was mistaken for integrity, which methinks is actually a big concept i never really comprehended.

bluejewel22 June 20 2005, 20:48:51 UTC

i'm waiting to see what your new acronym is

hartbrakehazrad June 20 2005, 21:59:08 UTC

ill think one up when i get there heh

and what do you think of the quality of my writing, oh readerous one?

facultas June 21 2005, 03:45:01 UTC

Its pretentious.

hartbrakehazrad June 21 2005, 13:20:35 UTC

crap, i don't it to be pretentious...

do you mean it's demanding distinction where it deserves none, or that's its overly showy? or both?

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facultas June 21 2005, 03:45:25 UTC

Do you know if Dave is still around?

hartbrakehazrad June 21 2005, 13:16:59 UTC

no idea, sorry. i haven't even been to the new elementary school yet, heh.

copwinks June 21 2005, 21:21:19 UTC

that makes two of us...and yes, Dave was still around as of this last basketball season.