Variant // 05

[haru_haru_21]

// Series
Slice of life; Angst
"Yah, wanna die?"  "I wouldn't mind since it's you" "Are you crazy" "Just a little bit"

For atenais_pala's birthday!

Comments

[haru_haru_21]

Spot for my unnie!~ ♥

[atenais_pala]

The way you're showing pieces of the whole story is really interesting. One single chapter is really confused, but when we put the layers side by side we can understand a little about what is happening.

It's obviously that both of them have some unresolved issues from their past. Looks like both of them lost a beloved person and they couldn't move forward. They keep trapped between their own confusion and their conflicted feelings. And because of fate their destinies meet in this point of their lives.

I'm really curious about the reason why Jiyong looks so fascinated for Seung. Does he like him or he understand that Seung is his equal? And this mysterious man, is he from some gang? I'm waiting for more. Thank you, Rin. ^^

[haru_haru_21]

Thank you for reading unnie, I always like long comments with reviews!

I have been really attracted to wirte angst and something a bit more different than what we see everyday. I guess, by making the characters share a similare kind of hurt and making them connect together is where I want to go at. Although, you might not be agreeing with me in the end, but so far, that is what I have planned.

Again, I hope this isn't too boring for you! ♥

spot!

[dyealer]

owhh...what happening to them?to JiYong..??to SeungHyun..??
who is that person, hitting SeungHyun??

omo!
Im really excited to read more..!!

and about DaeSung...I just can hope that he'll be strong facing all these and those ppl that giving him the hard times really are just pathetics!!
I hope I can do something but I can only pray for them..for DaeSung and BIGBANG!even nothing will ever be the same after this, VIPs are going to be there and root for BIGBANG!always!

Re: spot!

[haru_haru_21]

Thank you for reading, I'm glad your enjoying the fic thus far!

I can't say anything at this point, so things will start to connect in the later chapters.

To be honest, the situation involving Dae Sung has really upset me because he is being treated so harshly even when it isn't his fault. My mood has been pretty gloomy with all the school work and now this; it's really too much to handle. But, I belive in him and all the VIPs so, I hope he gets better soon!

Re: spot!

[dyealer]

We all have the same hope as the VIPs

[yumelover]

Ah i am so happy. I send sweet cookies to you.
This is really sad. Both Ji and Tabi look like they have rough past. I hope that Tabi lets Ji, because it looks like he needs him

[haru_haru_21]

*excepts cookies gladly* Thank you so much!
I think, readers will be a bit happier on the upcoming chapters, if not, find out more about their confusing past.

[super_frannie]

VHAT I missed the last chapter? Omg wow how did that happen! Hahaha lemme read chapter 4 first hee

[usoshigo]

Eoteoke!?!?!?
Poor Hyunnie and Yongie... ;_;
You better clean up this mess soon(that means: write a new chapter noooow)
^-^'

[haru_haru_21]

Ah, Uso-senpai, thank you for reading!
Ano, may I ask, what does "eoteoke" mean? *tilts head*

I really wish I can write right now, but since school is ending, exams and projects have been piling up and I don't even have time to check LJ anymore. Sorry for the long wait, but I will be back as soon as school is over, ne?

[usoshigo]

Ahh, eoteoke(어떻게 or eottoke or ottoke) means how, how can or what should in Korean dear. ^-^

Etto... School was the same for me. But the summer break started today! :'D
I suffer with you, school can be very annoying and hard *naderu*

[haru_haru_21]

Oh!!! I feel so stupid! But omo,do you know Korean???