Comments | harues: champagne supernova

harues

champagne supernova

Feb 20, 2013 19:05

CHAMPAGNE SUPERNOVA
1,133 words. kai/krystal.
he writes, swears, breathes, that there is always one thing he loves more than the stars - and that is krystal.

for the lovely douc, based off of this.
( in the valley of your limbs, in the hurricane of your smoke. )

fandom: f(x), fic: het, fandom: exo, otp: kai/krystal

Comments 23

kisoap February 22 2013, 04:36:47 UTC

sobs! i see your flawlessness.
spotting here!

harues February 22 2013, 21:48:46 UTC

spot saved for you, bb!

kisoap March 10 2013, 08:20:09 UTC

/belatedly returns!

ok, i love krystal in this. and this whole fic.
i love your writing. the way you word things and the way you've characterized everyone in here - it's so clear and i would never be able to confuse one narrative with another. HOW DO YOU TALENT and can you teach me ;_;

this was my absolute favorite line/part:
In the valley of her limbs, in the hurricane of her smoke, in the palms of Jongin's shaky hands, he writes, swears and breathes, that there is always one thing he loves more than the stars - and that is Krystal.

♥

harues March 10 2013, 16:27:21 UTC

/yay!

oh gosh, thanks!
and i can say the same things to you! you and your beautiful descriptions. LET'S SWITCH TALENTS.

i think that's my favorite line too! it's the last one i wrote :)

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harues February 22 2013, 21:49:16 UTC

thank you!

wintercreamed February 22 2013, 16:41:10 UTC

this was so beautifully written cries
makes you want to love its flawlessness and perfection. love the last part too ♥♥

harues February 22 2013, 21:49:10 UTC

d'aw, thanks! at the end i had no idea what i was doing, so i'm glad you loved it.

doyouknowwhy February 23 2013, 10:03:56 UTC

this is so beautifully written, my heart is swimming in emotions! your imagery for wanderlust and love and kai and krystal perfectly sways away from cliche plots which is always a great thing eajbvkdkfjbv.
if I could quote everything, I would but I can't so have my incoherence. aaaaaaaaaah! ♥♥♥

harues February 23 2013, 23:08:08 UTC

ahhhh! this is so sweet, thank you! and i hope it wasn't cliché. i decided to focus on imagery in this one!

douc February 28 2013, 05:48:01 UTC

hey! I apologize for such a late reply, school started and life just sucks, no time for anything whatsoever

anyways....OMG YOU WROTE SOMETHING AND IT'S FOR ME /CRYING FOREVER. Can I just say that the first paragraph is so pretty - like how do you write with all those pretty words and phrases?? HOW?? Second of all, kudos to you cause I've been seeing this prompt/quote float around for quite a long time now but couldn't think of anything to write. You however are amazing cause this turns out so incredibly beauty and poetic, the story line is amazing, it doesn't reveal too much which I like cause it gives me this sense of mystery about it. I also love how I didn't know where the heck this was going lol, it's a good thing cause with most fics I have an idea of where it's heading but this keeps me on my toes. I'm literally sitting there thinking - okay, what's happening next now?

In all seriousness, please write more, mi you gorgeous bb cause you write so, so well!

harues February 28 2013, 05:59:38 UTC

BABY BOO, STOP. d'aw, this is too sweet. i had to do something for the wonderful jaenana you gave me!

the first paragraph is one of my worst, oh my god. i was sitting there and wondering how the hell i was going to start off writing this. this prompt is hard! i had so many ideas, but i just stuck it to something simple. it really doesn't reveal much, because even i didn't know where it was going, haha! i guess it was just a dysfunctional one-sided love with a sexual relationship in it.

in all seriousness, i will! and in all seriousness, YOU BETTER TOO!