hey, lolita, hey

[harues]

HEY, LOLITA, HEY
2,730 words. krystal/sulli & a little krystal/kai.
Deux femme fatale, born to rule the raw hearts of fallen men with their lips and skinny hips.does anyone ever notice that i always write krystal like this? lolita/lana del rey/krystal is my head-canon. that teaser art film only enhanced it. also, i love my jungli, as you can tell.

Comments

[alittlefille]

I can quote so many words from this and you still won't get how much I love this piece.

[harues]

♡♡♡♡♡
thank you!

[kirakirashahida]

This is such a gorgeous piece I'm afraid I can't pinpoint my exact favourite because I love every single thing ♥

[harues]

AW, that's too kind. thank you!

[eesor]

My favorite part here, amongst all the greatness, is this: "wet breath exits the petals of her muted plum blossom lips......"

You make the words fuck you sound so elegant. Haha.

I love your writing style. It's very smooth with no pretense and discourse and it flowed quite nicely. I'm not good with comparisons and I don't even know if this will make sense but your choice of words is amazing! It's as if the words were strewn all over the floor but you picked them all up and laid them down (though I felt that you toyed with them as well haha) in proper order without much difficulty or whatever, and this masterpiece was given life. And the imagery!j All the pretty colors of pastels and grandeur!

This is undoubtedly excellent and beautiful!

[harues]

this is so flattering, thank you so much!

i'm glad it flowed nicely, i thought the switching of narratives would be distracting and, well, ultimately sudden. it makes sense, thanks! i just really choose pretty words and just smash them all together (but i practically use the same words over and over again). i did very much toy with them, haha. IMAGERY, MY LONG LOST LOVE.

thank you once again!

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[vergoldung]

Holy motherfucker, how do you do words??? Every single line of this is so gorgeous I honestly don't know which one to pick and quote. And my shipper feeeeeeels ;____________; Flawless queens walking all over their pretty boytoys and I weep.

OKAY BUT I STILL HAVE TO QUOTE THIS BECAUSE PERFECTION IF THERE EVER WAS :
She's never liked him. Sometimes she did, sometimes she didn't. Never liked how he looks at her, however. And he looks at her, now, Venus reborn, glaze of syrupy light, honey sheen, stripped of pathos. Saw her as something for viewing pleasure, a subject for placing impersonal angles on, a capsule for her lashes and line of her jaw. She was not a museum, but a mere theatre for the temporary Coppola-like cinema. She is a goddess, but in his presence, she is reduced to an object for the demeaning male gaze. She knows, knows that he doesn’t understand her, never will or did. Knows that he lacks the patience and qualities to understand her purpose and tenacity. And that he can never amount enough to catch her true beauty. He

[harues]

YOU ARE SO SWEET. I'm gushing all over the place.