{CONCRIT}

[harutastic]

Doing it right? Doing it wrong? If ever I skip an HMD or you simply have something glaring and pressing to tell me, do it here! Be a little bit gentle, though, no-one likes flames. (But generally, I like concrit.)

Anon and screened on.

Comments

[allendowed]

This is just a little random, since I'm not actually in your game, but I keep seeing you around memes and similar so I thought I'd leave a note. I'd prefer to leave concrit if I could, but to be honest I think I'd have to read your threads a lot more closely and really nitpick to do that. So all I can contribute instead is that I think you're probably the best Haru I've ever seen. You capture a lot of what I associate with her-headstrong, a little prideful, overflowing with righteous indignation at absurd things, and basically sweet at heart--and you do it really well. I don't actually have much interest in the character in canon, but you make me want to read her threads AND you somehow still feel IC, which is something I thought was impossible. So, mad props for that! You kind of rock, and if I find anything to critique I'll be back someday to give you a more useful note.

[harutastic]

jhgkjhkdhdskg OH GOSH MY LORDIE - thank you very very much for even taking the time to comment! I very much appreciate it, and hope to keep on the same level!