HOLD HEART (IkkaYumi)

Nov 10, 2008 14:18


HOLD HEART
forfayedoll
(Ikkaku/Yumichika) )

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ganja_chan November 11 2008, 00:01:26 UTC
Aww, that was quite cute :) Cute enough :D
(BTW - I'm always awed when someone manages to capture a real prompt in the story! XD)

*gives cookies!*

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haruyan November 11 2008, 00:50:51 UTC
Hehehe, thanks a lot, for the cookie too ^_^ The prompt wasn't too hard, and I always love writing some IkkaYumI~

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proudcockatrice November 12 2008, 01:34:24 UTC
I like it. Okay, that's an understatement, but I have the headache from hell and my language skills are temporarily inadequate.

Just one glitch: in "they payed for the room", it should be "paid". ;)

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haruyan November 12 2008, 19:21:41 UTC
Oh! Thanks for catching that glitch, sorry!

I'm glad you liked it~!

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