Ayushya

[hasri]

Vicharancha jalyat

Comments

[vidyarthini]

Kharach Rupali Khup Sundar Kavita keli ahes specaily shevatachya char olitun vastusthitila anusasrun lihilya ahes ani best part of your poem is starting la tu ek prashna mandala ahes ani shevati tyache uttar tu swatahach detes u realy great!!!

[hasri]

Thanx a lot Varsha!

[manogat]

Simply beautiful...But I wonder why were you irritated after writing such lovely lines...Or was it the irritation that motivated such creativity!

[hasri]

Actually i was quite angry at that time and i was frustrated with my luck :( when i wrote these lines!