Chapter One feedback

Dec 04, 2011 22:09

Please use this entry to comment with any feedback, ideas, complaints, discussion, etc regarding Chapter One: The Gentleman.

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mewd January 18 2012, 03:27:40 UTC
Is Hatchum's train disappearing?!

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armanky January 18 2012, 03:30:32 UTC
THIS IS NOT CONSTRUCTIVE.

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mewd January 18 2012, 06:04:58 UTC
Real comment: There's been a lot of talk about Hatchum is a big deal or that adventures are a thing but nothing has happened yet. Just internal chatter. It'd be easier to hook the viewer with stuff happening right off. The whole show don't tell schtick?

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armanky January 18 2012, 06:19:03 UTC
Yeah, I'm finding that might be an issue with this style of narrative. Bear in mind it's only been a couple of panels, but I may have to focus more on actions and hopefully convey that these are in lieu of some of Hatchum's written words. Like the dialogue doesn't have to literally contain every word he writes.

Once I work into a manageable format the whole beginning will probably be heavily altered if and when I attempt to make this thing public.

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missmorrichan January 30 2012, 16:58:25 UTC
How did you get to be such a wonderful artist, Blue. Explain this to me. Before I find some way to jam a bendy straw into your head and suck out all your latent talent for my own nefarious purposes.

(more legitimate question; what program are you drawing all of this in?)

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armanky January 30 2012, 18:15:39 UTC
Well Satan came up to me one day and was like, so hey, you got a nice soul there, and... wait, no, I've just been practicing a bunch. Lotsa figure drawing and tutorials etc etc! Glad to hear it's apparently paying off. Thank you!

I've been using Paint Tool SAI, which is awesome because you can use the stabilizer to slow it down and get obnoxiously smooth linework.

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