What I loved most is that you took every potential Dean/Cas moment and put them all into one fic, one cohesive story. Bravo.
I can't believe this is your first SPN and NC-17 slash fic. I definitely couldn't tell, and had to go back to check just now to make sure I wasn't wrong.
I loved how you had Castiel topping when he was feeling weak and then Dean topping when Castiel was stronger than ever. I feel like the symbolism there is important (not sure if that's what you were going for.) Plus, I just have a kink for Dean bottoming his first time with a guy.
I also loved God's point about how it would have taken Dean forever to come to terms with how he felt about Cas had He left Dean to his own devices. Because as Dean realized, even with the whole world telling him he belonged with Cas, it still took him forever to come to terms with it.
Anyway, loved every moment (truth or dare was especially awesome), and this one's definitely being bookmarked for repeat reading!
Thanks so much for the comment - I'm glad you enjoyed the ride :)
Yeah, this fic was actually a lot of firsts for me - not only the fandom and pairing but I consistently updated and got the whole thing banged out in under three months. It was a freaking WHIRLWIND dude I tell ya heh.
The choice of bottoms came out of a couple of things. The first time because I truly do believe Dean would dive in head first to anything that made him uncomfortable :P And because I think he would try to make things as good as they could be for Cas (or rather, as good as he thinks they could be ;P).
The second round was because after losing Sammy, then Cas and practically himself Dean needed to take back the power. Cas understanding that and letting him is I think what would make them a good match :)
Anyway, that's my preaching for the night. Thank you again for reading :)
I could not stop reading this all day! I LOVED THIS. You did so damn fantastic with Dean and subtly changing each of the episodes and just... EVERYTHING.
I can't even tell you how fantastic this was. You've made me fall in love with this pairing all over agin. I'm definitely pimping this to everyone I know. Thank you so much for such a beautiful fic!
Very well done! I'd say more but it would just be a repetition of what's been said. D: Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed your writing style and the way you incorporated actual lines into this made everything feel much more authentic!
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THIS IS PERFECTION AND I CAN'T EXPRESS IN WORDS HOW I FEEL ABOUT IT, BUT HERE'S SOME FLAILY-SQUEE TO DEMONSTRATE:
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*DED*
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What I loved most is that you took every potential Dean/Cas moment and put them all into one fic, one cohesive story. Bravo.
I can't believe this is your first SPN and NC-17 slash fic. I definitely couldn't tell, and had to go back to check just now to make sure I wasn't wrong.
I loved how you had Castiel topping when he was feeling weak and then Dean topping when Castiel was stronger than ever. I feel like the symbolism there is important (not sure if that's what you were going for.) Plus, I just have a kink for Dean bottoming his first time with a guy.
I also loved God's point about how it would have taken Dean forever to come to terms with how he felt about Cas had He left Dean to his own devices. Because as Dean realized, even with the whole world telling him he belonged with Cas, it still took him forever to come to terms with it.
Anyway, loved every moment (truth or dare was especially awesome), and this one's definitely being bookmarked for repeat reading!
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Yeah, this fic was actually a lot of firsts for me - not only the fandom and pairing but I consistently updated and got the whole thing banged out in under three months. It was a freaking WHIRLWIND dude I tell ya heh.
The choice of bottoms came out of a couple of things. The first time because I truly do believe Dean would dive in head first to anything that made him uncomfortable :P And because I think he would try to make things as good as they could be for Cas (or rather, as good as he thinks they could be ;P).
The second round was because after losing Sammy, then Cas and practically himself Dean needed to take back the power. Cas understanding that and letting him is I think what would make them a good match :)
Anyway, that's my preaching for the night. Thank you again for reading :)
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My favorite part was everything.
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Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed your writing style and the way you incorporated actual lines into this made everything feel much more authentic!
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