[fic] Dress Up 2/3

Aug 28, 2015 09:32

Title: Dress Up ( Read more... )

dress up, fic, yunjae

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donud August 28 2015, 06:53:15 UTC
omg!!! Sallaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa you are killing me! so hottttt

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hattukissa August 28 2015, 06:56:45 UTC
Omg did you read it already? XD So fast!!

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beth_1993 August 28 2015, 07:15:44 UTC
I think my favourite thing about this has to be the way Yunho reacts when he sees Jae in the morning 💜 I think that's how most people want to be looked at, as if they're the most important person :D so sweet!!

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hattukissa August 28 2015, 07:27:08 UTC
I totally know what you mean by that! Everyone deserves a special someone who'll look at them like that in the morning~ *__* And Yunho just happens to enjoy looking at Jae very much haha~
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, sweetie! <3 *hugs*

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wake_up_my_soul August 28 2015, 09:30:30 UTC
Oh gee! The sex surpassed any word I can think of at 4 in the morning. I will have to reread this again and again. Jae is so lucky man. A first like that one can only hope. And the ass eating comment😊 I blushed. I love dirty talk and you do it so well. I want a Yunho like this sadly I dont have a peen.

Anyways Jae I am sure he considers you his other half already he ate your ass, come on! 🍴 😃 I am sure clarification will come.

This is really cute girly with just the right amount of fucking sexy.👏

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hattukissa August 28 2015, 09:37:27 UTC
Oh my god I just got the giggles from that fork and knife emoticon you used there with the ass eating XDD I can't stop laughing! XD *wipes tears* Oh man that's perfect XD Hahahah...
Is it 4 in the morning over there? O^O it's around noon here and I posted this before going to work... This part is so smut I hope you found a lot of enjoyment from it haha~ You know what, I don't do dirty talk nearly as enough as I should O_O I need to write more of it, I really like it too! I want Yunho too... *sigh* But he belongs to Jae for sure~
Yup, Yunho's feelings have been pretty clear from the start :D Jae is just a bit confused as everything is so new to him~ Maybe Jae will find out in the third part :3
Thanks so much for reading and writing such a sweet comment! <3 *huggles* Oh man.. I'm still laughing at the fork and knife XD

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wake_up_my_soul August 28 2015, 17:18:19 UTC
I'm glad I could give you the giggles ^^. I was actually gonna add "eat the booty like groceries" which are lyrics from a rap song lol. But I was like eh that may be a bit much. Yea, I'm a night owl and just so happened to check lj. Its noon here now and I am replying haha.

Yea, I thoroughly enjoyed that part and the others. Yes please more dirty talk. It can only make the smut hotter its already scorching though.

Right I forgot Jaejoong is sixteen and everything is a first for him. Oh and the part with him sitting on the toilet with the sore ass and shaking legs *dies* why did I have to read that twice? 😳 Man I like Yunho wrecking his ass a little too much 💜 and Jaejoong being shaken by it.

Okay I will end my crazy comment here. I look forward to part three. Thanks for sharing this greatness with us girly *huggles back*

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hattukissa August 28 2015, 18:23:51 UTC
Oh my God, that is ever better!! XDDDD Hhaahah... What is wrong with me today, I have them Friday crazies XD Associating rap song lyrics to Yunho and Jae seems to be pretty good fun for me XD Nothing is too much when it comes to my sense of humor hahah!
I'll try to do that in one of my future fics then~ ;)
Yup, Jae was a virgin here but Yunho definitely took care of that part ;) I was actually giggling out loud while writing that toilet part XD I just thought it was kind of cute! Oh girl... I know what you mean! I like that too, a little too much or I wouldn't be writing about it every damn month.. ;D
Your comment provided very good entertainment so thank you for that! XD And you're very much welcome~ <3 ^^

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chaminko August 28 2015, 09:53:42 UTC

omo smutness overload.. i love this part too i love the part where yunho look at jae in the morning and can't seem to take his eye from him Jae u're definitly his other half.. since his already marks you in the a**

Thanks fr this awesome fic author-shi i always enjoy reading ur fic can't wait for the last part

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hattukissa August 28 2015, 10:10:39 UTC
Hahah smutness overload indeed~ I don't think I've ever written a chapter with as many sex scenes in it than in this chapter XD Yunho was definitely completely mesmerized by Jae's beauty there~ But who can blame him really? ;) And you're right about that... Yunho's feelings have been very clear from the start, he's just so into Jae <3
I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for reading and commenting! <3 *__*

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turtleandcrane August 28 2015, 10:44:33 UTC
OMG! I just leave comment in previous fic, told you to update soon and here i am writing another comment in your new updating.
One of my best Friday night ever!

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hattukissa August 28 2015, 10:56:32 UTC
You were in luck haha... I only just now posted this part before going to work ;) Hope you enjoy reading and please tell me what you think when you do read it~ <3

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turtleandcrane August 28 2015, 11:33:40 UTC
Awww... if i were you, i'll unable to work after writing such an intense smutt like this.
Really... it's so romantic.. the way yunho make love with jae.. so gentle.. it's just turn me on. Lol....
I think yunho more opened up after their first making love.
Hope everything going smoothly for both of them.
Well~ waiting for the more intense smut for the next update.. maybe involving such a darkest fantasy of yunho.. not only dressed up but maybe also toys or sex in public? Or threesome with changmin?
Ahaaaaaa.. i speak to much.. i trust you, whatever you write for the next chapter, i'm sure it would be awesome...
Have a great day sala~ ♡

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hattukissa August 28 2015, 11:45:04 UTC
I actually wrote this a couple weeks ago so before posting I only had to run a spell check and all that XD but I can tell you that when I wrote this stuff I was pretty damn horny XD it just gets so intense when you imagine every single detail O_O'
Yunho was indeed very gentle and patient with Jae *__* He might be a shy guy but he certainly knows what to do in bed ;) And you're right about that, Yunho will surely gain a bit more confidence now that he and Jae are really doing it :3
More smut will definitely come as this fic is mainly that XD Uh, doing it in public would be pretty damn hot! But sadly I already finished writing this story so that is kind of out of the question at this point XD
You have a great day too, and thanks so much for reading and commenting sweetie!! <3

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