I only just got home when this was posted, so lucky to be first xD I kind of half guessed that the captain was Jaejoong's father because he was treated alright and searched for but not made to work. But woah his powers :O he's like Storm from XMen xD and the chemistry they have together is cute, I'm glad neither of them arr denying the attraction. Still super curious about Yunho, at firat I thoight maybe a captain of a navy ship or something until it was revealed that he's only 17... Hmmm... I'll have to wait!! Great chapter and excellent art as always!!
You deserve the first spot, you always comment and read my stories and I really appreciate it! <3 Yeah, most of you guys were suspicious of why Jae was treated so differently... he has his own job on the ship so they don't want to risk losing him or anything which is why he isn't allowed to fight. Yeah, he kinda is! XD But you'll learn more about Jae's powers in the following chapters~ You're right, Yunho and Jae are clearly already sporting a crush on each other ;) Yeah, Yunho is a bit young for a captain... Maybe in the next part you'll find out a bit more? Thank you so much for reading and commenting, as always!! <3 *__*
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My favorite scene is when Yunho reads for Jae. So cute~~ (Yunho please forgive me but your bang really disturbs me 😭) Oh, and also when Yunho fixes Jae's shirt. What a gentleman 😍
Oops! Thank you for pointing out that typo, you become blind to them when you stare at a story long enough. And oh man, lj has been a bit of a bitch lately ;^; Good thing you noticed your comment had disappeared! I quite like that scene too! *__* I'm sorry but Yunho's hair won't change hahah.. If you ever go to Korea you'll be disturbed because so many people have that hair style lately XDD I'm sure Yunho actually wanted to rip that shirt off him XDD Thank you so much for reading and commenting~ <3
SO NOW THAT MY EXAMS ARE DONE I AM BACK TO BUSINESSSSSSS
ASKJDSLADA MAN I REALLY LIKED THIS CHAPTER ON THE SECOND READ *_* I LOVE HOW INNOCENT YUNJAE RELATIONSHIP ISSSSSS
FOR A MOMENT I THOUGHT THE CAPTAIN WAS GOING TO HURT YUNHO but then I thought ... this is kind of a fluff fic hahahaha
JAEJOONG IS ADORABLE Q____Q he CAN'T SLEEP BC HE THINKS OF THE KISS YUNHO GAVE HIM Q___q KILL ME PLS WITH ALL THESE INNOCENT FEELS ALSKJDSALDJAL i love young and inexperienced yunjae fumbling through the sexual journey alskdjslaja Q___Q hit me hard Salla, with all these innocent fetus experiences
JAEJOONG IS A MAGIC CREATURE Q_____Q ???!?!?!?!?!?!
I have a feeling the captain is not Jae's real dad #_#
Omg I'm lucky~ Two Adina comments in one day! *__*<3 I hope your exams went well. I know how stressful it can be but pls take care and don't overwork yourself the next time you have exams ;^; Glad you had a good time reading~ <3 They are indeed very innocent but I'm sure that is going to change soon haha XD Yeah, well... In this kind of fic that stuff wouldn't do XD It's too fluffy for the Captain to be that mean... Or is it? ;) Jae is always adorable ;) I wouldn't be able to sleep either if Yunho had just kissed me! I love young and inexperienced YunJae too, that's why I almost always write it... Jae is just so cute as a virgin I can't get enough of that XD Fumbling through the sexual journey.. hahahah awesome choice of words! XD The Captain is actually Jae's real dad but you'll find out more in the next part ^^ Thank you so much for reading and commenting, you know how much I appreciate it!! <3 *hugs*
Now that i have some freetime after uni i can finally leave all my feelz here! ;__; Gosh Salla u know how so pleasure my kokoro ♥ THIS FIC IS SO AMAZING AND I`M ALREADY IN LOVE WITH IT AND IT ONLY GETS BETTER WITH EVERY CHAPTER AND SHALALALA~
Jae is like the cutest strawberry cheesecake ever he is just so precious! "I think you have to kiss me again" XD Jae pleaseeee ♥~ Also Jae biting Yun`s lips like there is no tomorrow until Yunho finally puts his tongue to good use and Shows the Cupcake how its done! Hope Yun will teach him more in the following chapters *Wiggles Eyebrows* They are just so cute with the costumes♥
FUCK THE ART IS SO ON POINT I CAN'T EVEN YUN LOOKS JUST SOOOO HOT OMG AND JAE SOO SOO SOO CUTE I WANNA PINCH HIS BUTTCHEEKS XD
I was wondering if you forgot me! ;^; *clings to your leg* Do I? That is a very good thing haha~ I write my stories the way that pleasures my kokoro so it's very nice to share them with the world and see that you guys feel the same~ I do really like how this fic turned out so hopefully it keeps getting better every part! Jae is both precious, innocent and pretty demanding which is an interesting combination XD Maybe he's a strawberry cheesecake cupcake with a little bit of chili on top? Yunho's lips did a good job in taming him... I wonder what other parts of Yunho will do if you know what I mean 8---) *awkward winking* I want to pinch Jae's butt cheeks too!! His ass must be so cute and peachy ;^; Maybe I'll have Yunho pinch it in one of my fics haha.. Thanks so much for reading and commenting as always!! <3 *__*
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Still super curious about Yunho, at firat I thoight maybe a captain of a navy ship or something until it was revealed that he's only 17... Hmmm... I'll have to wait!! Great chapter and excellent art as always!!
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Yeah, Yunho is a bit young for a captain... Maybe in the next part you'll find out a bit more?
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, as always!! <3 *__*
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omg spot!
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I typed a comment yesterday but LJ didn't save it TT
... "PutI can't put my finger on it. ...
Typo? xD
My favorite scene is when Yunho reads for Jae. So cute~~ (Yunho please forgive me but your bang really disturbs me 😭)
Oh, and also when Yunho fixes Jae's shirt. What a gentleman 😍
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I quite like that scene too! *__* I'm sorry but Yunho's hair won't change hahah.. If you ever go to Korea you'll be disturbed because so many people have that hair style lately XDD
I'm sure Yunho actually wanted to rip that shirt off him XDD Thank you so much for reading and commenting~ <3
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ASKJDSLADA MAN I REALLY LIKED THIS CHAPTER ON THE SECOND READ *_* I LOVE HOW INNOCENT YUNJAE RELATIONSHIP ISSSSSS
FOR A MOMENT I THOUGHT THE CAPTAIN WAS GOING TO HURT YUNHO but then I thought ... this is kind of a fluff fic hahahaha
JAEJOONG IS ADORABLE Q____Q he CAN'T SLEEP BC HE THINKS OF THE KISS YUNHO GAVE HIM Q___q KILL ME PLS WITH ALL THESE INNOCENT FEELS ALSKJDSALDJAL i love young and inexperienced yunjae fumbling through the sexual journey alskdjslaja Q___Q hit me hard Salla, with all these innocent fetus experiences
JAEJOONG IS A MAGIC CREATURE Q_____Q ???!?!?!?!?!?!
I have a feeling the captain is not Jae's real dad #_#
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER HAHAHAHAHAHA
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Glad you had a good time reading~ <3 They are indeed very innocent but I'm sure that is going to change soon haha XD
Yeah, well... In this kind of fic that stuff wouldn't do XD It's too fluffy for the Captain to be that mean... Or is it? ;)
Jae is always adorable ;) I wouldn't be able to sleep either if Yunho had just kissed me! I love young and inexperienced YunJae too, that's why I almost always write it... Jae is just so cute as a virgin I can't get enough of that XD Fumbling through the sexual journey.. hahahah awesome choice of words! XD
The Captain is actually Jae's real dad but you'll find out more in the next part ^^ Thank you so much for reading and commenting, you know how much I appreciate it!! <3 *hugs*
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Jae is like the cutest strawberry cheesecake ever he is just so precious! "I think you have to kiss me again" XD Jae pleaseeee ♥~
Also Jae biting Yun`s lips like there is no tomorrow until Yunho finally puts his tongue to good use and Shows the Cupcake how its done! Hope Yun will teach him more in the following chapters *Wiggles Eyebrows*
They are just so cute with the costumes♥
FUCK THE ART IS SO ON POINT I CAN'T EVEN YUN LOOKS JUST SOOOO HOT OMG AND JAE SOO SOO SOO CUTE I WANNA PINCH HIS BUTTCHEEKS XD
Of reading the next chap~
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Jae is both precious, innocent and pretty demanding which is an interesting combination XD Maybe he's a strawberry cheesecake cupcake with a little bit of chili on top? Yunho's lips did a good job in taming him... I wonder what other parts of Yunho will do if you know what I mean 8---) *awkward winking*
I want to pinch Jae's butt cheeks too!! His ass must be so cute and peachy ;^; Maybe I'll have Yunho pinch it in one of my fics haha.. Thanks so much for reading and commenting as always!! <3 *__*
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