Comments | havokheights: All I Ask of You

havokheights

All I Ask of You

Oct 10, 2007 00:08

Title: All I Ask of You
Rating: 16 & Up
Fandom: Twilight
Pairing: Edward/Bella
Genre: Drama, Romance, Angst
Time Frame: Post-Eclipse - Post-August 13th *Spoilers*
Summary: An innocent kiss. A deadly desire. Bella and Edward’s first time could turn into a tragedy of its own, especially if Edward is unable to control himself. (Inspired by the ( Read more... )

Comments 9

love_eachother October 10 2007, 10:23:52 UTC

Aww
That was so good.
Excellent job, really.
I had to read the end a couple of times, because I didn't get it the first time.
Aww.
:]:]

havokheights October 10 2007, 20:36:57 UTC

Thanks! I haven't written anything really good in a while, so it's great to hear that people are actually enjoying it. I tend to confuse people with obsure thoughts and story lines. lol

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havokheights October 10 2007, 20:39:11 UTC

I just love writing angst. It's not that I'm angsty myself, but there's just something fun about writing it. lol Thanks!

reina_chan October 11 2007, 23:16:51 UTC

This was absolutely wonderful... you did an amazing job.

And I liked the ending. The whole thing fit very well for Edward, and the ending made sense. You really captured the internal struggle that Edward constantly endures just by being near Bella; I think it's hard for most of us to do that.

This was one of the best Twilight fics I've read! Thank you and please write more!

havokheights October 12 2007, 23:37:46 UTC

Speaking of blushing. lol Thanks. It took me forever to write it. Even though it was a oneshot. I had to keep stopping and asking myself "Am I causing Edward more pain than necessary?" lol. But the more pain, the better. Thanks a bunch. <3

thumpathumpa October 17 2007, 03:22:16 UTC

This was good.
I was a bit surprised about the ending though. I was expecting Edward would be able to fulfill Bella's wish.
Not that the ending wasn't good, just unexpected.

havokheights October 17 2007, 05:05:53 UTC

I think it surprised a few other people too since he's usually a very controlled person. It's the element of surprise, lol. Thanks.

empirex1020 May 15 2008, 17:21:13 UTC

Sooooo late to this party...

Still, excellently done! I love Edward POVs - they are hard to come by - and this was just perfect.

havokheights May 16 2008, 06:27:42 UTC

Haha. That's alright. I haven't really posted it too many places.

I agree, there aren't enought Edward POVs. I may consider writing a few more from his POV.

Thank you!