A Better Place, A Better Time

[havokheights]

Title: A Better Place, A Better Time -- Chapter 2
Rating: 13 & up
Fandom: Twilight
Pairing: Edward/Bella
Genre: Drama, Romance, Angst
Time Frame: New Moon, during Edward's disappearance
Summary: It’s impossible, this can’t be… 1917. Even time, itself, can’t keep them apart. Bella's traveling back in time to when Edward was a human... and the

Comments

[kneeling_glory]

More now please :)

[havokheights]

I'll try! Thanks.

[replays]

Your writing style is really beautiful, but I have to know what happens next! Please post more!

[havokheights]

Why, thank you. lol. I'll post it as soon as I can!

[flossiepots]

that was fantastic! more, more!

[havokheights]

Haha. Thank you! I'll post soon.

[vampgirl92]

loved it. more please

[empirex1020]

I just finished ch. 5 over at myowntwilight.com.

More? Please? More soon? =D

I do love your writing style, I have to say. Good twilight fic is hard to find - I think just due to the fact that the majority of the writers are so young and haven't honed their writing skills. So when I find a talented writer, it is cause to celebrate.

So... Huzzah!!!

Now. Go write.

[havokheights]

Aw, thank you!

If you really want to read the rest of it, I have all fourteen chapters posted at FanLib, plus the sequel. (http://www.fanlib.com/user/profile.do?userId=s33d1)

I plan to update on LJ sometime, but it runs so slow on my computer. :(

But, I totally agree with you. I've been in several other fandoms where there were, we'll say, newer writers who aren't as experiences... Plus all these "My version of Breaking Dawn," or "My version of Midnight Sun" are a little less than creative, especially when the grammar, spelling etc is completely off. :x

I'm all for people who can write their own versions of these stories, but they have to be well written of course! lol

Thanks, again!

[empirex1020]

*squee!* OMG! Thank you!

Off to read!