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hawk_pride_2007

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Aug 25, 2005 23:27

new song. reflects a lot on my emtions right now. especially the last line. semi-dedicated to someone...not gonna say who.

peter, if you'd like to put music to this, tell me. i have a few suggestions.

PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!

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_0hsnapthetang0 August 25 2005, 21:19:19 UTC

Nicely written boris

one thing that helps with times like these is you never known unless you try, whats to live you you stay in a safe shell, or relitively safe shell anyway, your heart is going to be broken/tosed around, theres no avoideing it, expesaly in high school, which is why i tried to avoide getting in a relationship while i was in it (as we all know that dident work) its somthing i regreat alittle because now that im out and when i was relationships i wasent ready for the heartbreaking words. I know its hard, but dam it if you honistly feel that way, let it out to whoever you want to tell it to, dont keep shit hidden/building inside of you, it could veary well wreak you, as what happend to my later winter/spring this year, and isent the choice of having a hand/a shoulder a nice one to have?

enough of my bable fo' sho'!

_0hsnapthetang0 August 25 2005, 21:21:58 UTC

btw sorry about my swearing..im sleepy/sore my bad

and sorry for saying fo' sho' and my bad...

hawk_pride_2007 August 25 2005, 21:36:55 UTC

hahaha no problem bout the swearing. BUT FO'SHO'? TANGO, WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU ON? oh, lack of sleep. lol.

anyway, thanks for the advice man, i'll try and see how things turn out...

_0hsnapthetang0 August 26 2005, 21:55:34 UTC

lmao its fun to try and be gangsta sometimes, not really

NP for the advice bro, hope it helps

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electricsax906 August 26 2005, 04:32:31 UTC

meh, i could. might as well get some of your advice on the music aspect of the songs for once. but of course i'll have to edit this just a bit...

hawk_pride_2007 August 26 2005, 06:11:28 UTC

lol.

what i was thinking is that you could use a piano intro. On the outro, hold the word "too" for a bit, then on the word "afraid", play a guitar chord to finish it.

other than that, the music writing/editing of the song is all yours.

lil_shamrock August 26 2005, 14:50:18 UTC

very cool song. who is it about?? :-p

hawk_pride_2007 August 26 2005, 15:15:41 UTC

thanks!!

im soooo not telling. :P