Meanwhile, in Shay's head:

Nov 09, 2005 22:15

((Takes place after the fight with Dr. Light.))

While you were out... )

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waxwontbeenough November 14 2005, 23:48:25 UTC
(This is stunningly well written. Wow....wow. Jenny and Shay should compare notes sometime. Unfortunately, there's already a Jenny at Milliways I just found out, so Jenny won't be there.

Terry and Shay could talk about this, too. Meaning, traumatic life events. Despite the perception in the Nexus, Terry is hardly a sheltered, naive Irish girl. She's seen far too many disembowled bodies and blood while with X-Force to ever be naive.

Again, this was wonderfully written. I've never seen a Shayera come close to yours. <3 <3 )

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hawk_shay November 15 2005, 00:10:57 UTC
((Why, thank you. Due credit should go to our Harley player for beta-ing it, but I'd been meaning to go into Shay's childhood a little more for a while. I mean, yes, everyone knows she's got Issues, but she's pretty functional so it's hard to really express how deeply messed up she really is. Years and years of trauma there.

I like the chance to explore parts of her history and personality, because there's so much there to explore. You have to give Truman and Ostrander credit - they covered all the bases. That's how characters should be written.

Shay and Jenny can still chat on Sages, though, right? They'd hit it off so well. Heh.

Thanks so much for the feedback, darlin'. Always nice to know I'm doing well.))

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