It's All Relative 21

[hawkbehere]

Title: It’s All Relative (Chapter 21/Continuing)
Author: hawkbehere (hawkbehere2@yahoo.com)
Rated:  NC-17. 
Summary: A nearly endless, overly dialogue-driven domestic chapter.
Disclaimer: I have no rights in the DWP universe.

A/N. To any readers who remain, my deepest apologies for the incredible delay. I was traveling for a month and, upon my return,

Comments

[gypsy_druid]

I hated the wait, but the chapter definitely made up for it. Mom gets a reality check and Martha gets funnier every time I read about her. I can't wait to see what happens next.

[hawkbehere]

gypsy_d. I hated the wait, too. Believe it or not, unfinished stuff hangs on my conscience--it's never quite out of my mind. I may be out of my mind, but my unfinished story isn't. I'm happy you enjoyed it.

[whitelder]

woot Hawks back! Martha is a crack up!

? for you

[michi6877]

Um, I wanted to let you know I love your icon and was wondering if you'd mind if I stole it with your permission?

Re: ? for you

[whitelder]

sure, I didn't make it so I guess its steal able spreading the Mirandy love and all.

Re: ? for you

[michi6877]

*grins widely* Thank you!!!! I appreciate it.

[sherlock_adams]

*sigh* I love this story, I really do! I fangirl-squeed when I saw the post and everyone in my office just turned and stared at me..

Anyhoo, 'twas a great chapter and I so wish I had a brother like Sam, he sounds great....oh, and I wish I had a girlfriend like Miranda, but yeah...

[hawkbehere]

sherlock! You scamp! Reading fanfic in the office--and this was totes NSFW. Unless you have a really, really progressive office. Your comment made me think...do I wish I had a girlfriend like Miranda or do I wish I WERE a girlfriend like Miranda? Hmmmm.

Thank you for reading...

[musicinferno]

Amazing story! I caught up just now and I must say you are an amazing writer. You have a god given talent! Jesus Christ. I loved EVERYTHING about this so far. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

And also:
And this moved Andy deeply, to know that Miranda could find such intense pleasure in the act of relaxing and, basically, just being sweetly petted over. When she hugged Miranda afterwards, however, she knew better than to say a word.

This was so touching. It truly is. This fic is one of my all time favourites. You justify how much they love each other. Their love cannot be expressed in words, but it looks like you've found them.

[hawkbehere]

You're so kind. It's always...hmmm, I was going to say a thrill but the word is actually gratifying--it's gratifying to hear that you've written something that someone really enjoys. And I mean that in the sense that I'm grateful that you enjoy it.

Thank you for writing and thank you for reading.

[androgynydelmar]

Wow, Hawk. This was another fabulous chapter. I particularly enjoyed the dynamic between Miranda and Andy while out at lunch, and Martha's Godzilla explanation at the end. I love how you're allowing Miranda to reveal the subtle nuances of her personality little by little, while staying true to her character, and being consistent. I especially love how the twins are virtually little carbon copies of Miranda, but we can see their behavior being tempered by Andy. If you ever decide to cast this story a good 20 years into the future, it would be very interesting to see how they turn out because of her influence. Anyhow, thanks for updating. You rock!!! :D

[hawkbehere]

Hi, you! I'm so happy you liked it. And, actually--the flash-forward might be 25 years. That was what is termed a spoiler, I believe. Thanks for reading!